Reviews for Great Expectations
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 26 . 12/17/2014
I loved how the opening gave us an insight into James' world.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 25 . 12/17/2014
I found your descriptions of prematurity to be quite realistic. I know from my parents what it was like because I was born at 30 weeks.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 24 . 12/17/2014
The ending was just so fantastic! It really conveyed the bond between mother and son.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 23 . 12/17/2014
I laughed out loud when I saw the name of the chapter! Good job.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 22 . 12/17/2014
:o
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
:D
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 20 . 12/17/2014
Ron's dialogue in this chapter was excellent. It just felt right.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 19 . 12/17/2014
You write both Harry's POV and the 3rd person very well.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 18 . 12/17/2014
The moment between the two women at the end seemed to come at the perfect time.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
I love "love talk"- keep it coming.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 16 . 12/17/2014
I thought that the chapter title was quite appropriate.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 15 . 12/17/2014
Overall, an excellent chapter.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 14 . 12/17/2014
The dialogue in the opening put a real smile on my face :)
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 13 . 12/17/2014
Nicely done.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 12 . 12/17/2014
The description of Ginny in the opening was so sweet! It warmed my heart.
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