Reviews for Great Expectations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I remember starting to read this story some time ago but couldn't remember if I'd ever finished it. Glad I took the time to start again, it was fantastic! |
![]() ![]() That was... Incredible. I've been looking for Harry/Ginny fanfics for a while now, and this one has fulfilled everything. It was completely worth all the effort from you, and thanks for writing such an amazing story. It made me feel kinda nostalgic, thinking about Harry and Ginny as full-grown adults with children... I just didn't want to let go of 17 year old Harry, with whom I passed through a great deal. At the end I was pretty tearful, thinking about everything since a baby with a lightning-shaped scar being left on Privet Drive, Number 4 to Harry biding farewell to his children at the Hogwarts Express. Thank you for such an amazing story, I'll be looking forward to that sequel! |
![]() ![]() Hi! I basically just read your entire story in 2 days(it would have been 1 but I had to be at work at 6 this morning! Hahaha) Anyways I love this story it's really brilliant and I don't think I've read a better post Deathly Hollows fic. This story was truly brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved how the opening gave us an insight into James' world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found your descriptions of prematurity to be quite realistic. I know from my parents what it was like because I was born at 30 weeks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was just so fantastic! It really conveyed the bond between mother and son. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed out loud when I saw the name of the chapter! Good job. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ron's dialogue in this chapter was excellent. It just felt right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write both Harry's POV and the 3rd person very well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The moment between the two women at the end seemed to come at the perfect time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love "love talk"- keep it coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that the chapter title was quite appropriate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, an excellent chapter. |