Reviews for Hazel Eyes
dancing elf chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
interesting
tk04 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
that was so sad. I feel like their should be another part to the story. I was to know what will happen when the boy grew up and find out about his father relationship about Joey. It would be great if we were to find out that he is alive. ok damm it I just can't believe is over. I love it. ok.
Laptop Newbie chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Bittersweet. A female character regrets for her actions, one of my favorite. The first person point of view and revealed letter format were not of my liking much but the end with the baby was creative. Put a lot of yourself into this to write it, didn't you? Good jobbb, angst only means romance in their afterlife or whatever happy place.
Redemptress chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
*sniff* that got me. It really did. It was amazing, absolutely amazing. The way you explained the whole situation between Seto and Jou from someone else's point of view was refreshing, and different, so well done with that.

Another thing, you didn't explain every single detail, which-normally- would annoy me no end (its just my personal taste) but in this fanfic, it worked, I think because in leaving stuff like that out, you gave the reader the opportunity to fill in the gaps, so again, well done.

And lastly, you portrayed the characters wery well...nice characterisation, Synaptic-Firefly. :)

It was a good read!

RunningDown
Kagimine chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I'm tearing up... very beautiful.
Lolita Lockett chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
-sob-

That brought tears to my eyes, it did. ;;

A beautiful story. -cries-

I-I can't think too clearly right now...
SeverusPotterSnape chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
*glares-sobs* that was so sad! wah! jou died? *pouts* That was a good one with Shizuka's point of view. Really good...
thanx-for-da-energy chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
This was such a great story! I felt so bad for Shizuka, but mostly Seto. What he did was so sad, and left Jou just because he was scared. But they were really never together, but still. I love this story!
Laesneniel chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
That was so sad. sniff But i loved it.
The Red Lightning chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
OH MY GOD! That was really sad... actually I was crying a little *confessing*

I've also written a similar fic (The Favour) but it's far from this sad... I'm a little happy that the ending was somewhat "happy" though

but I liked this a lot!

/Red.
Jupiter 13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Soo beautiful! I almosy cried while reading this, and I'm NOT one to cry often! Thank you for a beautiful story! Keep up the good work!
Yoru no Tsuyu chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
*teart-streaked face*

This was...so... sad... *wipes tears; everyone lookes with a 'wtf' face because of the crying*

It was beautiful...in a painful way. That Seto-no-baka! He shoulda said wait he felt wait then, when Katsuya was still alive! Mou! TTTT Words to a dead person doesn't really count...

Oh well.. what can I say more than what I did? I was said, it was beautiful, it made me cry and it touched my heart-it moved my dark heart of mine. Ohh, that was poetic. XD

I'll be reading more of works; this was excellent!
xXAngelic ScarsXx chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
That was beautiful. It really was...

But, oh so very depressing .

Why did he have to die?
Reijou chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
GAH!

I loved it. XD Esp. how it ended. I love it when one of my favorite characters die, haha.

But yeah, you did a great job :)
mandapandabug chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
that was so sad. like... i'm tearing up... i probably would hasve cried if you didn't end with thwat funny sentence. that doesn't boud well for Jou... already dead... hehe. well. this was really sad... Seto and Shizuka had sex? *shudder* that must have been awkward. i feel so bad for them all. damn. this is sad. if they both weren't so stubbern... really Kaiba. he could have had Jou! so sad. i can't handle this. review you later_
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