Reviews for Something Wrong
JamesLuver chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Haha, I was totally not expecting that! P Just when it was getting good, eh? xD Poor Mrs. Lovett, she can’t even get what she wants in a dream!

Your writing style is very good. I really enjoyed this. I loved your word choices, and your characterisation is perfect. The last sentence is just win. xD
Defying.Expectations chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Oh ho ho ho ho, you are so MEAN! But I suppose that's hypocritical of me to say, because I've done something very similiar in another fandom. But we're not talking about me right now, eh? Anyway, this was hott. Very hott. I loved it when Sweeney just marches up to her and asks if he can take her back to bed. So smexy. Man, you totally had me going while I was reading this - I SO did not think it was a dream! Ack. xD Nice fic, love.
Randomnesz chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
xD lol that was hot
Dollymop chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Aw poor Mrs. Lovett :P Awesome job btw! Shame it was just a dream... XD
so nice so smart chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
oh damn.. it was getting good before she woke up! jk awesome fic :D
Miss Malfaisant chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
AW! That's so sad! But I love it.
Winnywriter chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Wow...*swoons* THAT WAS AMAZING! Alas...just a dream...a smokin' hot dream, that is! XD

Excellent work!
Jinx De Beaufort chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
omg that one was good x)

well done ]
Lobsters forever chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Great Story! I adored reading it!
grindly chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
i hate to admit this but i know how she feels

incredible
haruxMCRxtobi chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
i like the twist at the end

i didnt expect that

good job!
MuchTooHighACost chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I think I was more disappointed than Mrs. lovett lol ] great fic
otteropessed523 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
amazing; you write well. I am obsessed with this musical rite now!
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
It really is something she would dream about, I think. Wonderful job capturing her interest.
Angel-o-Darkness chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
aww poor
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