Reviews for Across the Ocean |
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![]() ![]() Charlie should fucking get back to whichever hole he crawled out of. The fucking parents drama, even Carlisle is a bitch. |
![]() ![]() The cunt Esme opens the bedroom door of her adult son's without fucking knocking. How the fuck was that funny. |
![]() ![]() This story is boring |
![]() ![]() The french drama at the wedding boutique was fucking stupid. When is he going to take her to his parents place? All they're doing is sitting in the flat, fucking boring. |
![]() ![]() Another story with the interfering bitch Alice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was written almost 20 years ago, but it popped up on a fic finders group on fb. I have just been reading along, but I have to comment on this chapter, because...her being pregnant definitely was a 'surpriiise'! Unless I misread between them 'making out' and hugging while they were sleeping...this seemed like the immaculate conception...as to date they have not had any sex or even foreplay! lol Also, for having an immune condition - enough to not even go to her catering events, she sure does get out to the pharmacy and go shopping for ingredients, and when she traveled to see Edward, and toured around, and went shopping with Rose. Maybe she is better? Anyway, it's a fun read. Thank you to your young self for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella just lost all my respect |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story moves so fast and its a little offputting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incrível história |
![]() ![]() ![]() So this fic was awesome and I would really love to bind a copy for my personal book collection! Would you be willing to give permission for me to do so? |
![]() ![]() Que sont devenues les parents de bella ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and can’t remember all the details so time to read again! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, such a nice easy read with a fun plot! I’m English, so it was weird reading your attempt at writing an English POV! It was still very American, but I appreciated the effort. It was nice to see a few English places mentioned and read British dialect. |
![]() ![]() It's a beautiful story. I couldn't keep the smile away from my face the whole time I read it. Great work . Loved it ️ |