Reviews for Across the Ocean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So this fic was awesome and I would really love to bind a copy for my personal book collection! Would you be willing to give permission for me to do so? |
![]() ![]() Que sont devenues les parents de bella ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and can’t remember all the details so time to read again! Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, such a nice easy read with a fun plot! I’m English, so it was weird reading your attempt at writing an English POV! It was still very American, but I appreciated the effort. It was nice to see a few English places mentioned and read British dialect. |
![]() ![]() It's a beautiful story. I couldn't keep the smile away from my face the whole time I read it. Great work . Loved it ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I guess I'm rather late to the party. I have no clue if you will ever even see this, but I wanted to let you know that it's such a sweet and uplifting story. It's not perfect (what is?), but it's a fluffy feel-good piece that made me smile a lot. The one thing that I would have to say kinda bugged me was the whole issue with Bella's weak immune system. It felt like a throw away plot line because you didn't really use it. Had she needed to become extremely ill in the story and Edward almost lose her or something for him to realize his feelings then it would have seemed relevant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to reading your story! |
![]() ![]() Emails are great but I love writing letters |
![]() ![]() Wish I has the guts to do something like send a message in a bottle |
![]() ![]() Edward, Emmett, esme, Carlisle coming up? |
![]() ![]() Why would Edward be amazed? The only thing amazing about that letter was how far it traveled. THATS the letter she decides to toss into the ocean? How embarrassing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. Enjoying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man! Its such a fluffy story. Like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find it amusing that a story that has two characters who are book editors has so very many spelling and grammatical mistakes. it almost ruined the story for me, tbh. the plot was good, but felt very rushed. |