very nice 2 chapters.

great ending. but every story needs some intensity some problems

i like it but why isn't there any problems, i'm getting bored of all the happy things the story has to contain some problems to be interesting

hi i would like to tell you this my best friend LOVES you aand so do i

hi there i am just asking this... can you tell me what happed in breaking dawn part 2

Lol, I loved Bella talking to herself... Yeah, I totally do that ;)

I love this Story D

Awww'xx
Best friends have a baby on the same day ... so cute'xx

My mother had a baby two years ago my little bro of course and just thought id tell you that despite the fact this story is funny when the water goes on jessica but you have contractions first sos xx love the story though xx acroos the ocean rocks ! lol

Wow... I thought that the idea of the bottle was so romantic. I want to do that too... hahaha. I loved the end. It made me cry when Chris and Marie confessed their love. I could imagine them. In my mind they were so cute. Thanks for the story, it was completely great.

Beautiful story

Amazing!

aha! emails the miracle of modern technology...no more pollution...
see you on the flip side...*i have no idea what that means* bye

so it got to eddie with going into a throat of a baby dolphin! YAY...it's going good...see you in chapter x...

you know people who read this might get ideas and add more to global pollution and kill baby dolphins... pout
but i will continue to read...