Reviews for Across the Ocean
seymourblogger chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
very nice 2 chapters.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/10/2012
great ending. but every story needs some intensity some problems
Guest chapter 14 . 12/9/2012
i like it but why isn't there any problems, i'm getting bored of all the happy things the story has to contain some problems to be interesting
megan chapter 2 . 11/27/2012
hi i would like to tell you this my best friend LOVES you aand so do i
megan chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
hi there i am just asking this... can you tell me what happed in breaking dawn part 2
Halo221 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Lol, I loved Bella talking to herself... Yeah, I totally do that ;)
Lily1992 chapter 20 . 11/16/2012
I love this Story D
Guest chapter 16 . 11/1/2012
Best friends have a baby on the same day ... so cute'xx
jasmin c chapter 16 . 10/29/2012
My mother had a baby two years ago my little bro of course and just thought id tell you that despite the fact this story is funny when the water goes on jessica but you have contractions first sos xx love the story though xx acroos the ocean rocks ! lol
CullenMasenAlways chapter 20 . 10/27/2012
Wow... I thought that the idea of the bottle was so romantic. I want to do that too... hahaha. I loved the end. It made me cry when Chris and Marie confessed their love. I could imagine them. In my mind they were so cute. Thanks for the story, it was completely great.
Godschildtweety chapter 17 . 10/19/2012
Beautiful story
I Love Dimitri Belikov chapter 16 . 10/2/2012
Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
aha! emails the miracle of modern more pollution...
see you on the flip side...*i have no idea what that means* bye
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
so it got to eddie with going into a throat of a baby dolphin!'s going good...see you in chapter x...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
you know people who read this might get ideas and add more to global pollution and kill baby dolphins... pout
but i will continue to read...
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