Reviews for Across the Ocean |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I guess I'm rather late to the party. I have no clue if you will ever even see this, but I wanted to let you know that it's such a sweet and uplifting story. It's not perfect (what is?), but it's a fluffy feel-good piece that made me smile a lot. The one thing that I would have to say kinda bugged me was the whole issue with Bella's weak immune system. It felt like a throw away plot line because you didn't really use it. Had she needed to become extremely ill in the story and Edward almost lose her or something for him to realize his feelings then it would have seemed relevant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm looking forward to reading your story! |
![]() ![]() Emails are great but I love writing letters |
![]() ![]() Wish I has the guts to do something like send a message in a bottle |
![]() ![]() Edward, Emmett, esme, Carlisle coming up? |
![]() ![]() Why would Edward be amazed? The only thing amazing about that letter was how far it traveled. THATS the letter she decides to toss into the ocean? How embarrassing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. Enjoying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man! Its such a fluffy story. Like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find it amusing that a story that has two characters who are book editors has so very many spelling and grammatical mistakes. it almost ruined the story for me, tbh. the plot was good, but felt very rushed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. Well written. Cute moments. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adored this story so much! It’s the perfect blend of humor, romance, and drama, and I just love how fluffy and warm it all is :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() now this is one story i cant forget |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely love this! the long distance struggle is so real but these two are so cute! |
![]() ![]() Noooooo! This story has ended! *sob* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! |