Reviews for Across the Ocean |
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![]() ![]() So amazing! :D |
![]() ![]() I loved your story...thank you for the lovely journey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha its really funny bella said "this ones mine" about the baby. i said that to my husband when i was pregnant with our second child. it took the third and last bubba to be mine hahahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read all of the 20 chapters and I'm in aw. It's one of my new found favorite I know by looking at your other stories I know I will love them just as much as I love my other favorites! Keep writing more stories, because I would do anything to read the more you have. I would love if you wrote more of edward & bella stories for sure...!...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great futuretaske! I loved it...thanks for this story. Very poignant, and sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So friggin' cute! Yes, let's get them married! |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! Yay! SlthoughbI thought they were getting naked and passionate in front of their friends! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're only 18? Wow, I'm impressed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My son went to London to do a job, met a lovely British lass, and is married and the Daddy of twins! My SoCal boy has lived in London for almost 6 years! They can figure it out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're all really cute! Of course, Edward and Emmett could be serial killers, for all they know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! That was an even better ending than the first one. I loved the little time jumps and how Christopher and Marie did end up together in the end. That he's lived her since he was five. Surprised Edward didn't cringe when Christopher professed that they were each other's firsts in everything. Instead his heart was happy that they finally found their way back to one another. What a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us all here. ~Christy |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely ending to their wonderful tale. I really enjoyed this journey. I liked Marie and how she is with her daddy. It was sweet that both Edward and Bella both know that they listen in on the monitor . . . too cute. Very sweet story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm truly surprised that Jessica was still working there. Really? After all that time flirting with him, he just took it, without reporting her to HR? Why? He hired Tanya to replace her, yet never fired Jessica. Very strange. I was wondering if Alice and Jasper's little one would be the opposite of what Edward and Bella had . . . making the parents think they may be together one day. I would think growing up with someone that closely, that it would feel more like a sibling or cousin, than anything else. Very cute that they had their babies on the same day. Wouldn't it be cute if Rose was in there exactly one year later having her baby? The one she's not pregnant with yet. Very sweet chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Filler, fluff, whatever you want to call it . . . it was a wonderful chapter. That was really fun to read. It was nice to learn that Alice and Jasper are pregnant too. That Emmett has purchased the engagement ring. It was cute that Bella and Edward want to be surprised in the birth of the sex of the baby. Arguing the whole pregnancy about whether it's a girl or a boy. |