Reviews for Burns
kurokuro chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
oke the last part made me go kya xDD

this is pure fluff this is pure genious

i love jiroh

nice job
ritsu01 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Oh, that was so good! Who new Jiroh can be such a wiseguy...
angel chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Marui is so seme. and Jirou the cute little uke!- they just rot my teeth out
offthewebby chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
MazokuTenshi chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Aww... Jiroh's just a sweetie, ain't he?

*presses faves*...
verbal acuity chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
This is such a cute pairing! I love the way you write. :3 Keep it up!
Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 1/4/2008

I'm wondering if Jirou just said that just cause he wanted a kiss. XD
Autumn D. Cain chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Simply adorable..

Could you make another pairing with this kind of fluff?

Maybe Uke Pair?


My Dad is Mr.Clean chapter 1 . 12/31/2007



RebeccasanFujiEijiLVR chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
aw jiroh and marui very cute.
Eternal.Angel chapter 1 . 12/31/2007 cute. You're not horrible at all when it comes to romance, Demon Brat-san (is that appropriate to call you? XD). Your supposedly 'horrible' attempt at romance from before is actually sweet and fluffy. _

Wait, is that someone else who's horrible attempt at romance actually a horrible attempt at romance? O_O (I dunno now... XD)

Ganbare, and Happy New Year!
Death Angel's Shadow 2 chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
"...Hmm... Not bad... (Well, better than last time)." Lol, Jiroh seems kidish sometimes. XD
fruity cheerios chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
aw _

that was sweet of Marui...

[i wonder how Jirou really burned his lips...if he did]