Reviews for The Note |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! IThis story made me cry and smile at the same time. Something new to me for sure. INSTAND FAVORITE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() metoria! another good fic! at first i thought it was another one of those suicide everyone spilling their inner most feelings stories. and leena stops him just in time and they make out or something. and that it was different since it was bit instead of leena. but then the whole thing was an entire misunderstanding! and bit was totally in character and leena was completly embarrased. hhaahhahah. what awesomeness. that was a great twist. best part: everyone was repulsed. bit smacked his lips satisfied. hahahahah. man. and i'm incredibly happy she was like 'i love you like a brother, everyone does' it still got the feeling across and you had a couple of fluffy moments in that last part, but it wasn't too mushy too fast. so bravo! a hilarious/romantic/angsty fic that deserves praise! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work, it's good to see someone turning the overly angsty Bit/Leena thing on its ear XD. You've got a few grammar wibbles here and there, but man. This made me happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story centering on Bit and Leena. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this story really rockZ...! pls update it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, that was great I was chuckling at certain comments. The "you to to love too" thing bugged me though XD The end was kind of sappy and I kind of skipped it |