|Reviews for Broken Ballerina|
| Kikixeni chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
While reading this, I felt a lot of sympathy for poor little Franny. ;_; Great story.
| hawkquisitor chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Wow! This really captures the relationship between Franziska and Manfried. Poor Franziska.
...one thing I noticed in the latter half of the story was the awkward pronouns. i.e.:
As he brought the steaming liquid to his mouth, the young man smiled thoughtfully and continued to make conversation.
The modifier at the beginning of the sentence makes it seem like the young butler is drinking the tea himself, which certainly wouldn't please Manfred at all; he being the stingy stinge that he is. :D
Other than that, the story was great- a definite add to my favorites.
| Count X. Gamlxltoe chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
this is a good story.
| Ivy deLeon chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
That was...in lack for a better word...PERFECT! I absolutely loved it! Please keep writing!
| The Light Chaser chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
This is a good way to start a new year, anyway the story was ok I liked it.
| Black Scepter chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Interesting. The life of young Franziska Von Karma is kinda what I expected; full of preasure and frustration. An interesting way to start the new year indeed.