Reviews for SRMTHG 1st Story Being Human
TigerNinja16 chapter 3 . 11/19/2012
That was really good. I like it. Hopefully, the Hyperforce will be able to turn Jinmay back to normal, and defeat Krinkle. I wonder how he escaped.
ElasticPoodle chapter 3 . 6/9/2008
One small tip.


Other than that it’s a good story, keep it up.
My.Bloody.Tears chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
it was weird. but very good. you should write a romance story with human jinmay in it.
IndigoClockwork chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Good plotline, I can tell you worked on it. My only suggestion would be to separate your paragraphs into a few smaller ones, so it'll be easier to read :). Also, your tense switches from past to present a few times, but that's not important. I love the imagination your put into this, very original. Keep writing!