|Reviews for Fading|
| always-kh chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
i like it but is this one part supposed to make sense?
'I feel myself splitting gnittilps flesym leef I
Into two parts strap owt otnI'
one more comment"
With nothing to stop it’s hunting
It’s coming, it’s here
i like this part but i think you could either make all the its parts into one line or make them each a seperate line because normally it's good to have rep of three which you have but because its not all linked together it takes a little away from the effect, at least imo. thx.
| hopelina101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I'm not that into poetry but I liked it._
| Akito17 chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Cool. *nods* More please!
| Angel Peach Blossom chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
That was written so well! I think you did a really good job.
Nice touch with writing a couple of the words backwards. I was prepared for that.
Keep up the good work!