Reviews for Fading
always-kh chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
i like it but is this one part supposed to make sense?

'I feel myself splitting gnittilps flesym leef I

Into two parts strap owt otnI'

one more comment"

With nothing to stop it’s hunting

It’s coming, it’s here

i like this part but i think you could either make all the its parts into one line or make them each a seperate line because normally it's good to have rep of three which you have but because its not all linked together it takes a little away from the effect, at least imo. thx.
hopelina101 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I'm not that into poetry but I liked it._
Akito17 chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Cool. *nods* More please!

~Akito
Angel Peach Blossom chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Wow...

That was written so well! I think you did a really good job.

Nice touch with writing a couple of the words backwards. I was prepared for that.

Keep up the good work!