Reviews for Not Capable
KCH chapter 4 . 8/29/2015
Arigatou _ (_-) I really want to read this cuz this is really good I love it so much.. Please update more
Guest chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
Finish it please
kandita chapter 7 . 3/9/2012
Update soon
Diehard243 chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Isn't C2 an explosive compound?
Brianna chapter 7 . 10/28/2010
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 7 . 7/20/2009
the ending was nice.
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
what the hell? How can you end a chapter like this?
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 5 . 7/20/2009
as of right now his OOCness isn't unbearable.
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 4 . 7/20/2009
...nothing happened in this chapter. and why is gaara acting like that? Because he thinks messing with her That doesn't seem like something Gaara would do.
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 3 . 7/20/2009
well, you're not a grammatical puppeteer, but you are funny.

Jeez, I at least though everyone would treat the KAZEKAGE with more respect than they have been. Especially Hiashi who is a respectful man by duty.
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
this chapter was funny. Good surprise at the end, having Amaya be assigned Gaara's care-taker. If Gaara wants Hinata as his nurse he's gonna have to work for it!

I was a little put off though, by all the grammar mistakes. A lot of misplaced commas and absence of commas and strange arrangements of sentences...

practice makes perfect, though.
Stitchpuppy01 chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
actually this chapter wasn't long at all. The ending was nice, with Hinata winding up as Gaara's nurse and all that, but the recovery time needed is very extreme. If it was going to be that extreme, you should have described Gaara's injury better than you did.

Also, it wasn't very smooth just saying Gaara and his siblings 'were suddenly attacked by one of Orochimaru's minions'

that makes no sense. Not only was it extremely random, but there wasn't any descriptions in there that suggested any kind of plot formation or reason for the minion showing up.

(ps. this is constructive criticism and nothing else)
Winter Ink chapter 6 . 5/23/2009
woah. never knew gaara could be such a seducer. nothing wrong with it, just seems pretty out of character. or that he'swarming up to hinata so much. wouldmhave expected a few more weeks or concersations before they melt the ice.
Jaylea Nyx Felesian chapter 7 . 3/19/2009
i loved it its so cute i like how gaara tricked her mean but cute...never thought he had it in him with this story but good dont worry about the shortness of the story dynimite comes in small pakages i love it sorry cant spell can u tell lol but keep writing please
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 6 . 1/20/2009
i really like it (sorry for reviewing this chapter instead of the next, but apparently y laptop doesn't allow me to scroll to the end of the chapter, so i couldn't reach the review-button)

i'm very curioius about how gaara'll tease hinata the next time! _
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