Reviews for Legendary Inheritance
Reina Ann Vilre chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Why are several people voting for Ike and Soren even though you said no slash pairings? *Sigh* I find annoying when peole like that never seem to listen to you.

Anyway if you do continue I personally like Lucia and Soren. Don't ask me why I just like that pairing, I think they would make a cute couple.

Though, no offense to anyone who likes it, but I hate the Lucia/Bastian. She practically hates his guts, and it doesn't help that he is always hitting on her. Not to mention I just don't like Bastian period. I find guys like that so irritating.
Unseen-Angel20 chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Roonil Wazlib chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
This looks really interesting, I hope you continue with it
Azure Teriques chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Such a good story! You should really continue it. _ I can't wait for the next chapter.
Adriannu255 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
You've got a nice story started here. I love it!

For pairings... I like Soren/Mist, Soren/Iliyana, Ranulf/Lethe, Ike/Lethe, and Elincia/Geoffrey.

Please update soon!
Deep Space Cowgirl chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Ow, you really opened Pandora's Box on this one. Letting your readers suggest their own pairing ideas? I admire your courage. I also wonder what you think about how nearly everyone ignored your request for no slash and immediately started clamoring for Soren/Ike... (Although, I do have to admit, considering that Ike is just about the only character in the game that Soren opens up to... well, I'm not surprised.) I'll also admit to being something of a sucker for Mist/Rolf, although I can't really see how that pairing would add to a story revolving around Soren. As a matter of fact, I can't really see how any romance would add to a story revolving around Soren, although I agree and feel for you on how support-screwed the people of Tellius have been. I look forward to seeing your take on the game.

(Hey, if I'm going to be selfish here, why don't I request Ike/Elincia? I thought their interactions were very interesting in FE9, and was sort of pissed about how they acted almost like strangers in the sequel. Intelligent Systems really dropped the ball in the character development area of that game, don't you agree?)
Witcher Co chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
This is an intresting view on how Soren was found. This little snippit does not have any problems and appears well planed and thought out I like it. I shall continue to view your work and tell you if your quilty slips.

Also I like Marcia paired with Crimean Royal Knight Fifth Platoon

Captain Kieran. I like this pairing because I think Marcia's rare common sense is a good counter balence also I enjoy the hilarty of thinking how this would further complicate her life. She already has to baby sit her brother it would be funny to have her fall in love that the oppisite set of problems. Instead of being a lazy unexcitable ofe that avoids work like Makalov, Kieran is to excitable and may be a little too dedicated to every thing he does. I also think because of their supports that Marcia in the least admires Kieran because of his views of allies and what is important(A support).
Reiko x 3 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
How about a Soren/Ilyana pairing. I will admit that this paring intrigues me somewhat, so it's be interestingt to see how it works out. I'm happy with any straight pairing actually. I have nothing against homosexuality, but yaoi and shonen-ai are even more beyond my comprehension than heterosexual romances are.

Dark: And considering that my little light is so dense that she doesn't even reckognize when someone is actually trying to ask her out, that's saying something.

*flushes* So I'm a bit naive! You KNOW my social awareness is virtually nonexistant! I can't help it any more than you can help being a psychopathic sadist.

Dark: *rolls eyes* I know, I know. Blame the autism. It's just frustrating for me...

*confused* Eh?

Dark: *sighs* Never mind, little light. You wouldn't get it even if I told you...

Only because you never tell me anything. I hate not being able to understand things! You know that!

Dark: ...I'll tell you when you're older.


Dark: ...Maybe when your 70...

*twitch* I hate you. *mutters* Bloody dark side... *ahem* Update soon please. Ja ne!
Sakura Irving chapter 1 . 1/16/2008

Hm...Pairings. I wonder...

Hey, and to other reviewer...anyone read the fine print that says, "...and please NO crack or slash pairings..."

Anyways...I will vote for a random


mages! It's amazing! *gasps!* But it would kill SotheXMicaiah...:(

Anyways...amazing detail and storytelling!
summoner chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
awesome! i vote IkeXSoren X3
Aquatic-Idealist chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Soren is a wonderful character. I am glad that there are more fics about his practically ignored past. He is much like Tauroneo in that Intelligent Systems failed to really tell much about what happened to him (except that Tauroneo is completely ignored while Soren does get to reveal himself to Ike somewhat.)

As for pairings, well, they're for you to decide. I personally enjoy Soren/Lucia (it would bring peace between Daein and Crimea if Soren is Daein's prince, and it also makes sense due to both of them being extremely loyal people and both being tacticians), Soren/Lethe (Soren overcomes his hate for laguz), and Soren/Ilyana (Soren has a girl who will give him the kindness he never truly received from anyone but Ike.)

I also like Tauroneo/Titania, and it would be nice to see Tauroneo more often in fics. That pairing simply rocks because of the fact that it's the only Titania pairing that would make sense based on age and the fact that Tauroneo is Greil's old friend.

But, regardless, it's your choice. These are all merely opinions, nothing more.
Generic Character chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Do a Jill and Rhys or a Rhys and Nephenee, please.
An Ordinary Fan chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Wonderful start. It's always nice to see that a person cares about the story of the characters, and not just the trials that they must face. Keep it up! Oh, and as for the pairings...

*pulls out a list*

Before I begin, I should warn the audience that there may be some SPOILERS. I've taken the time to evenly divide the parts; a blank line separates couples with people from FE9 with those from FE10, and a split down the middle separates those that develop in-game with those that aren't exactly implied, but still possible. With that said...


Boyd/Mist (I must be the only guy here that doesn't really mind these two together...)






















...And that's about it. If I thought up of any more, I'd have to take a page out of Roxius' book and make a 'Pairings Madness' fic.
FrodoSilverlune chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
This is great! I'm new to Fire Emblem. I haven't finished PoR yet, but I do like Soren. This will be a great story to read. It's well written so far, too. I can't wait to see where you take the story!
Ebil Chameleon chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Awesome start. My vote is in for Ike/Soren all the way! I LOVE that pairing!
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