Seems to be a good story but can't read it in its entirety because chapter seven is unavailable for some reason

this was beautiful im crying like a baby it was passionate and cute full of life and love , full of happiness and sadness but the character development were perfectly done

What an amazing and insightful story. This is not usually what I read in fanfictions, but I love it so much. Keep up the good work, I love it.

Me encantó tu historia, pena que no halla continuación

I'm not a big fan of Snape, but this sounded interesting so i gave it a shot. I'm really glad i did because this was a very interesting story. Two interesting worlds you built for this. Well done and thanks for sharing!

I just read the whole thing and wow! You're amazing at making it feel like the reader is literally in the story! If you're not already an author of a book of your own, you should be.

poignant, clever, intriguing. A

*gross sobbing*

You wrote our Snape's predicament well. I can't imagine how painful this would be for him. Very nice writing overall.

Beautiful job setting both scenarios up.

Ooh! I'm the person you Gabe the link to on Reddit. Thank you so much. This idea is great and I can't wait to dig in to the fic.

Please. Please let this end happily.

Really? You’re making me cry. T~T

Good Story

this story was such a delight to read