Much rougher rides than I expected; hope there's some relief soon. Still written well.

Good start, with fine characterizations. Things are unfolding about as expected and quite well described. Both HPs and both Snapes are in for rough rides. I can only hope that both sets can emerge relatively unscathed in the end.

This was beautiful! Thank you!

What an amazing and unique story. It had so much emotion in it. It seems on par with his character that Snape sacrificed some of his power for Lilly, even if it was another Lilly. That along with our Harry's memory injury gave it a bittersweet yet realistic ending. It does sound like Harry will mostly recover. Will Snape? Will he regain the power he lost? He was more powerful than most magical people, so maybe has has some lead way. The only thing is that we didn't find out why the parallel world switch happened.

Such an intense and emotional part of the story. You made very interesting lore.
One one chapter to go, and I'll see how our Harry faired. Figures he would do something like that because our Harry has self-sacrificing tendencies due to be treated so horribly. Now other world Snape and Lilly will appreciate him more because there was that one point in the story where they were giving him a hard time for no valid reason. I don't know what there were talking about with saying he was lying to them. Lilly keeps forgetting, and it was a difficult thing to explain. It was terrible of her to say how he wasn't her son. It wasn't his fault he was sent to another reality. It just happened. Now definitely Snape at least feels as if our Harry is his son too. Probably Lilly will as well. Hopefully the curse can be completely fixed eventually with this step forward because a memory curse like that is brutal.

What an incredible chapter.

Severus has gotten so attached to this Harry because he is part of what he could have had.

Those Wizarding Mice are adorable and super fun.
LOL. That "unimpressive" line.
Also, Snape can fly without a broom, unless this alternate version can't. I don't know when in cannon he started being able to do that anyway.

I'm glad to see Ron's being nicer to Harry now. He was giving him such a hard time before. It's neither Harry's fault they were both sucked to a different universe. They didn't ask that to happen. Honestly, it's on par with Ron's character unfortunately. He has a history of getting mad at Harry for things that are not his fault. Just look at how he treated him with the Tri Wizard tournament.

"It happens to me at least once a year." LOL.

"The conversation went downhill from there." Yea I'm sure it would.

Man. The plot keeps thickening.

I am so excited to read this. I have always wanted to see this kind of concept done. This is such an interesting start.

Bravo. This story made me cry several times, and I dont cry easily. I wish you had more stories. One of the best stories I've ever read. You have an incredible gift.

What a touching story. Thanks for sharing.