Reviews for Ghost of You
20 Thousand Leagues chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Great characterization! First, though, your summary is amazing. No one writes good summaries anymore, but yours was great.

Anyway, Subaru's post-TB mentality is especially well done. Specifically, towards the end, "With Fuuma, he felt like the world narrowed down and started to crush him, like his lungs tightened and he was starting to choke. None of it was real, but he felt it all the same," caught my attention as being very accurate (in my perception).

Finally, the parallel at the end (Subaru and Fuuma both knowing "the time" is near) closed things up perfectly and dramatically. Great job! It's so nice to see good new X