|Reviews for Envisioned Mirage|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/4/2013
I don't like Suzaku in this story. He's L.L.'s and C.C.'s "lightbulb"
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
It's a prologue but it's as long as a normal chapter
| King2010 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
L-O-L! You must be a very comedic person. I had to laugh quite a bit at the irony in some of what happened here. The dream, her different shifts at work, and then getting hired as his assistant. Bravo, I can't wait to read more.
| RiseofaRebellion chapter 10 . 12/6/2009
i really like tyhis story and will patiently await the next cahpter, keep up the good work. i believe u used fluff right if not dont worry about it kay -
| RiseofaRebellion chapter 7 . 12/6/2009
aww i was looking forward to seeing suzaku in this fic but why is he such a bad guy, do you not like him? and swhy is he afte cc, and how does he know about shirley, and how the heck did u get so good at writing, - awesome story now to read the rest.
| MyBeloved chapter 10 . 8/16/2009
aww :) how sweet. i think you've done a good job so far, and i hope you continue... are you still going to have 20 chapters?
i'm intrested to see how those some-what unidentified characters (like Orangeboy ;) kallen and... shirley?) play a part in the up-coming chapters. right now, though, i'm mostly curious about lelouch and suzaku's relationship... how did they get into that rivalry? i am kinda a fan of suzaku, so im kinda sad to see him written as the bad guy. lol, but other then that, LOVE the cute relationship between C.C. an lelouch. i look forward to reading the rest of your story.
| freyasakura chapter 10 . 12/13/2008
I have to say, your English is better than some. You're doing a great job. It's been 9 months! More chapters please!
| tailedfox225 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Wow, I would have screamed something out loud or something. Lol
| Watery Rainbow chapter 8 . 8/14/2008
| SpiderGoddess7777 chapter 8 . 7/16/2008
Thank you for activating the A.R. (anonymous reviews) option a chapter ago. This fanfic is interesting. This chapter had me visualizing Lelouch and C.C. together.
| pie108 chapter 10 . 7/3/2008
your story was good but now its getting boring
you should talk more about Lelouch’s past
it'll draw some more attention to your story
| Spiral01 chapter 10 . 7/2/2008
Well, let me first say that I have enjoyed reading through all this story so far, especially in light of how hopeless it actually seems for these two to love each other in the actual show.
You capture many aspects of their personalities well from what I have seen, though of course given the change in history and such this is expected to some degree.
Something I'd like to ask though, is how old Lelouch and C.C. are supposed to be? I assume that C.C. is not some supernatural immortal so is she older than Lelouch by a few years or are they all the same age?
I like how you have made Lelouch's past different in some aspects and I look forward to seeing how everything reveals itself. I'm guessing that the red head (and perhaps this other girl who seems to have been Lelouch's love in the past) is Kallen and I'm wondering how her appearence will change things if it does occur.
One thing I'd like to suggest, and this is rather hard for me to explain, is that at a few occasions I have had trouble following conversations since at times it doesn't seem quite clear as to who has been talking. That probably isn't all that helpful and I haven't been very specific as I can't recall precisely where these occured.
All in all though, I have enjoyed your work very much and I hope to see more of it. I hope that however this ends though, that it ends reletively happy though it is of course your decision in the end.
| icarus923 chapter 7 . 6/14/2008
as usual i hate suzaku...
| icarus923 chapter 6 . 6/13/2008
very nice! cant believe that lulu is afraid of porridge
| icarus923 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
i liked it, its interesting