|Reviews for DBV Series 7: Fragile Peace|
| Guest chapter 117 . 3/13
I love the whole dbv series's and for saga eight I was wonder could verto go to the naruto verse with trucks and gotten and bece ninja think about verto learns fuinjutsu, medical fuinjutsu, gen/fuin. Jutsu, ninjutsu, medical ninjutsu , kinjutsu , kenjutsu , genjutsu, senjutsu, just think about it
| magnum95 chapter 111 . 12/23/2013
i wonder if verto could add some of those earth elemental techniques to his arsenal? but would it make up for the loss of his psi energy?
| jeffrey chapter 117 . 11/23/2013
You still haven't put anything on Lenz's gravestone
| jeffreysmith5073 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
I cant wait untill ssj4 gets revealed in your story! I realy would love it if you gave me a hint or two on if/when it will be introduced!
| Jesse chapter 117 . 8/14/2013
I have followed this fanfic since the beginning. I took a year off and caught up again this summer. This is truly the most creative and action packed story I have ever read. The attention to detail and character descriptions, plot twists and use of modern characters have left me wanting more after every chapter. I am a huge DBZ fan. This story takes what the amazing mind of Akira Toriyama thought up and takes it to another level and refines it through years of toil and blood in every paragraph. Verto is very true to human instinct and feelings by creating a character that is completely honest with himself. I am a follower for life!
| majorpain100 chapter 117 . 7/29/2013
This is my favorite story on fanfiction! And ican't wait for the new chapters to come out later.
| Mleebs530 chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Holy shit. I just finished reading all 7 sagas over the last 3 weeks and I can honestly say that I really enjoyed it. It's easily on my top 10 favorite stories. Its really difficult to find good writing on this site sometimes. A lot of peoples stories are poorly punctuated, the stories usually don't have a strong sense of chronology or description within the plot, the characters usually act completely OOC, or the stories end up being closer to GT than DBZ. I can happily say that these stories have none of that. The characters and plot are as on point as any other popular story here. I'm excited to see what kind of mind fuck the 8th Saga is. Have you read Honor Trip, Bringer of Death, or The Fall of Lord Frieza? If not I recommend those stories starting with the first two. I'd easily throw this series in the same league. Keep up the good work man.
| JediMasterChris1 chapter 117 . 3/15/2013
Hey man! I have caught up on your series now and feel it's time to give you my first review on it.
I enjoy every story in this series so far, all of your oc's are very well rounded and fit in with the DBZ cast, even the characters from other franchises that have cross overed into your stories fit in well.
I also saw on your profile that some people have a problem with all the cursing in your stories, personally I find the cursing makes it more realistic, and the heroes cursing out the villains is just pure fucking bad ass, I can't tell you how many times I watched DBZ and wish the heroes would cuss out the villains.
I'm glad that you aren't allowing these people to change how you write your stories, keep doing what you're doing Bro!
| mike chapter 117 . 3/11/2013
Your writing astounded and amazed me throughout the 6 sagas. Hell even in the beginning of the 7th it was good vs that android. Then it turned horrible. Dude, what the fuck happened? Your writing turned horrible. Verto became COMPLETELY out of character, and yes, his language is TERRIBLE, which makes the story FAR less enjoyable. I mean what the hell is the villain supposed to say when the hero fucking curses at him with foul language. Dear God man, there are so many things you can say WITHOUT FUCKING CURSING YOU MORON. I am so dissapointed
| Wolf chapter 8 . 3/6/2013
You should try lucid dreaming
| Blacktuy chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
How old is verto.
| Aliqhuart chapter 117 . 3/6/2013
I like all the chapters that you have written but this one makes me take my cap off before you and the swift changes of events :D
| BillyTheKid621 chapter 117 . 3/8/2013
This series was absolutely incredible. For the past 2 and a half years, I have been following up and reading this saga as it was published, awaiting for the next chapter to be updated, and I can't believe Fragile Peace has come to a close.
I felt this series was your best yet; the string of stories and situations, all diverse in their own way, came together beautifully. Although I felt like some parts strayed off and left me thinking, "How is this all going to fit together?", I enjoyed every second of it. Your writing has improved as you've written, and I always find myself either laughing my ass off or in shock from whatever may occur. The ending was nothing like I was expecting, and I cannot wait to see what Verto may have to go through in the future, especially since he has lost some of his powers. Not only that, but the end cliffhanger has left me begging for more, just like always.
I cannot wait to see what you have planned for Series 8, I am sure it will be phenomenal. Although we have to wait until Christmas the latest, I am sure that you writing the series out before publishing will speed up the process and allow your readers to be even happier.
Keep on writing, you're fantastic and I cannot wait for more.
| Sultan chapter 117 . 3/4/2013
When the council was ready to bring Lenz back, I was off my seat and Verto's decision changed my mood. In couple reviews ago, I said Lenz will come back but didn't expect it to be so soon. That being said, how come the Kais' or Leira or the Council couldn't sense Lenz presence in the galaxy? I have my doubts that whether Lenz is still in there? Or is it all just Kaon? I am really rooting for the former but DT is too cruel. Fasha's gone & I don't want it to happen again. Where's the DBV forum? I think waiting for Saga 8 is gonna be the hardest thing and I might just nag DT about the update haha... Saga 7 was long and good. I think I might just read the whole thing again and hope the time flies and stay on the same page with everyone.
| Sultan chapter 116 . 3/4/2013
I am amazed how easily Razil escaped... I thought those who were "Up Above" were real bad-asses! But No! They're all gi-gi's... I'm gonna write a short story, do a self-insert and pound Razil's ass just to feel better. Feeling little sad that I've to wait a long time for Saga 8. Nice chapter btw :)