|Reviews for Darkness in Zero|
| DarkSeaRain chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Well done! I love the detail you put into DIZ's thoughts, and how he refuses to believe that he is not acting for the best. He really has lost some of his humanity, hasn't he?
Also, I really liked the comparison of how the dusk was like dawn... very nice _
It would have been helpful if there was some kind of break between DIz's POV and Riku's POV, but it wasn't a huge issue.
I never thought about how DIZ escaped darkness by embracing fury fueled by hatred. Interesting thought...
| Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
I rather liked this story/scene/thought. The pace, style, and characterisation are excellent. I enjoyed the perspective very much. The grammar was solid and the atmosphere was great. Well done.