Great job!

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it doesn't mean that i'm worried about gaara but where tf is he? after his battle with sasuke,he just disappeared

& i'm not really sure that sasuke is a cat yokai; despite the way u describe his features it's more like he's a wolf (minus his tonguewhere tf is sai ,nejidanzo anyway?

ohlet's not forget that u hadn't said anything about how minakushi disappeared,& naruto's yokai side is more prominent than him being jinchuriki of kurama

Your run-on sentences have run-on sentences! But, to be fair, that’s an issue that many writers deal with when trying to describe an image. It’s difficult to keep the flow of the story AND avoid too many run on sentences while being descriptive of the setting.

Excellent ! Makes me want to read the sequel .

If Sasuke is a youkai , what would be it's name ?

This story was intense! Creative and very well written. No parts were boring and I never knew what was going to happen next. Amazing story!

OMG! I have truly enjoyed reading this story it was so riveting and it truly showed in the various relationships depicted in your Fanfic. I can't wait to read the sequel.

that was a real surprise...the old badgers let there foes grow so strong over time that they had so much Manpower, and know where there hideout are and that they will meet...but the exact Timing meens that they had a rat in the old bastard Group...
what a Desaster, hope that the Young ones got out alright and maybe meet soon.
poor iruka i think it will hurt him more than naruto as he does not know what happened to his new son...
what a end of this part of the story

see...that is why i do think they should turn the table and hunt down the hunters and stop this for all the time...
that was intense..and the proving fight Play game was sweeta bit soon..but its understandable that they reacted like this.

they really go fast, sure it was not the real Thing but really Close,...iruka will get a stroke and kakashi more perv when they find this two like this

i reallyy dont understand this hunters, but also not the Clans...with such a treat i would kill the hunters bevor they can kill off any People or even whole Familys like bevor...

wow, sasuke more or less claimed him as his, that was fast...teens
but i must say poor sakura but she must have known this, sasuke never did Show interest in anyone, only when naruto did Show up
but i think...ino liked the show

iruka is really stupid...i mean i know he think he Needs to protecct narutos virtue and such, but he Forgets that he himself is mated to a youkai and he would be a hypocrite if he says naruto cant... and the both are near adult Teens... and he woul hurt them with the way he is acting, as if being a demon is bad...and with this the same as the old hometown People did...

so naruto accepted what he is and turned back to look after sasuke or help him, sasukke did win his fight too...and they accepte there feelings...more or less...and kisssed for real...awwwww