Reviews for From Under the Star Filled Sky |
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tweedldee chapter 8 . 2/24/2008 luv the story and the plot so far :D party - cliche? nah, go for it! in my opinion your story has a very different touch (at least from what ive read before ), so it can easily afford a little bit of cliche. cant wait for the update, even if its gonna take a while as for the mpreg... please dont, or at least wait a little bit! they are really a bit too young for becoming parents! keep it up! |
WonderDaze chapter 8 . 2/23/2008 love it! go for the mpreg! i mean you've already had the hanyou stuff in why not the mpreg right it's completely fangirl logical 。- |
Simply chapter 8 . 2/22/2008 Awesome chapter, I really like it, Esp. the Hinta Naruto Sasuke part...if that makes sense..but anyways update soon! |
It's Just That chapter 8 . 2/22/2008 Wow. Kakashi sounded like a fangirl with the whole "SASUKE-KUN!" thing. Made me laugh outright for a minute, you know? And of the 'lineage' thing...you make it seem so ominous. Like it's a bad thing (but we all know it aint a bad thing, otherwise there'd be no man-secks xD). Woot for Kakashi's mad skills in deducing that Naruto's a jinchuuriki! HAH! Kick arse, man! And HOMG! Gaara! GAARA! Wohoo! He's here! YEY. Poor 'ruka though. It's pretty hard to tell the truth to someone like Naruto: the blond is pretty dense, after all. o_O; Ack, I know how it feels to catch up on assignments and shite. I was absent for a week once, and goddamn, were there so many sheets of fckin' work in my desk by the time I came back. Urgh. I learnt the hard way that I should have a homework-study buddy with me and stuff. Grah. Oh, Hinata. You spineless, SPINELESS wench. Le sigh. Neji and TenTen are together? ._. No offense, I have firm beliefs that Neji is too pretty for a girl. I could understand any other dood (even Naruto, LE GASP!), but...yeah. Erm, yeah. That's all I have to say about that thing. Hm. HM. -Scratches chin- Funny thing is, I can't wait until Ino dresses Naruto up. Does that make me more perverted than I already am? xD Good chapter, and NO. A party isn't THAT cliche. A vacation to the alps is, though. So you should draw the line there. And about the MPREG. DON'T DO IT. Ah. XD Don't do it. ;-; It's just..well, if NARUTO is going to get knocked up, it should be when he's like 20ish, not...teenish. That'd be so sad. O, the future and impending angst! -Shies away and swoons- Yeah, I enjoyed. :D Even if you take FOREVER to update, well, just know I'll be here, hanging onto that darned cliffhanger. xD |
cluelessninja65 chapter 8 . 2/21/2008 o is sasuke jealous of hinata and going to try to get neji to go all overprotective? haha i love kakashi! poor iruka having to deal with a naive naruto when talking about things like that! yay gaara's coming! can't wait for more! please update soon! |
Jadej.j chapter 8 . 2/21/2008 I didn't see the poll but if you type the MPEG then I see no problem with it :) |
dragonfire04 chapter 8 . 2/21/2008 PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. |
Berebescu bazagra chapter 8 . 2/21/2008 yay, update! I'm really not one for reviewing but I decided to review because this story needs MORE! So yea... a PARTY? *has never been to one of THOSE parties* This should be interesting, can't wait to read more! |
redbull07 chapter 8 . 2/21/2008 *does weird indian dance* loved it, as usual. you know what i'll be voting for ;) |
Yo-Yo chapter 7 . 2/15/2008 I thought the story is very interesting so far. Please keep up the good work! It's sad that no one is reviewing, but I would think that people are enjoying it! I love the way the story is heading and the interaction of each of the characters so please keep on writing! |
It's Just That chapter 7 . 2/14/2008 Y-you're terrible! Making Naruto get beat up like that. I mean, really, I'd expect Naruto to make a more kick-butt comeback but...You know...You actually made it up with the whole 'Sasuke is next to me and giving me a free lift' sorta thing...Heh, made me snigger. Will those guys come back? They shouldn't, because I'm sure Sasuke would beat them up! Being the possessive Uchiha he is, he'd probably-you know...castrate them or something. Not that I wouldn't want to see that, you know? xD Still confused. The seal is making me think crap. But the UST is making me think good! Harhar, being a parttime pervert is fun! x-x; For me, I think Iruka is so...well, cute. Have you seen in the anime, in the first episode of Shippuden, when Naruto came back and stuff? Iruka sounded like a femme lady, but that was all right. He was charming in his own way, with all his flashbacks about Naruto being a kid and stuff. Naruto is gonna have his famous healing skills still, right? I mean, not to heal anybody, but to heal himself up, right? Right, okay, good. xD Kakashi is still the same pervert, even to the little ones. That's sort of sad. So when he's an old, balding man, he'd still be your neighborhood pervertslashpedophile, huh? WOOT! |
Escalus chapter 7 . 2/14/2008 Oh my poor, precious, cuddly writer! Have you truly gone so long without the review-ing lurve? Pitiful state! The stars weep tears of great sorrowing upon your bow-ed head! Kitties snuggle up to you to spread their fur-shedding affection! The very boughs of Yggdrassil go weak and tremble with your pain! And so here's hug from this reader. Making you feel better...;3 |
It's Just That chapter 6 . 2/13/2008 Funky chapter. Especially with Naruto and SASUKE's immaturity. And you call them highschool students? Pfft. More like elementary students, with their ridiculous ways to get back at each other. But ahh, the good old days. Sigh. The Kakashi Iruka interaction is great! But I fear I have to get ready to do my homework instead of slacking off and doing other stuff that I shouldn't really be doing this late...xD Lovely chapter, though it was a bit choppy. AND WHAT IS IT WITH NARUTO'S SEAL! Argh, you got me on the balls of my feet, wondering wth is up with it! |
It's Just That chapter 5 . 2/13/2008 Nah. I don't think Kakashi was terribly OOC in this chapter. He was just being possessive and stuff. Normal for a person that had his lover escape him for nearly seven years and smells a person on said lover. Hm, what a soap opera! xD Sakura is still annoying. Ino is like, somewhat better, but still anoying. Go Shikamaru go! And Hinata, le sigh. She should get over that stuttering thingy. But Neji? Mwhaha! I have evil intents for the long-haired hyuuga bishounen. Actually, all those wicked plots are in my mind, and they're quite dirty. Ve~ery. o_o Wth is up with the seal? The Kyuubi seal? Argh, I'm curious! |
It's Just That chapter 4 . 2/13/2008 Nah. You were slightly or moderately original in your going about on this whole chapter. Er, or at least, as original as one can be when writing a Naruto fiction. xD Not that I'm saying that it's anything awful, but...just so you know... Anywa~aay. That was a great introductory chapter int Shichiyou! Sakura and Ino are still annoying. Really, just REALLY annoying. I mean they got better in the manga, but Sakura still has her annoying moments. Like when she got that poison off of Kankuro, but using that idiot jutsu that Tsunade taught her...she didn't ACTUALLY cure him, she just washed the poison away from his bloodstream. Not a great way to impress me. XD But I digress. Kiba is great! And Naruto sticking up for himself is even better. Hah! BEAT THAT UCHIHA-TARD! Betcha can't up Naruto's awesomeness, huh? :D And the avoiding the whole Sasuke deal? Nah, ain't gonna work, Naruto. It's a good one! -Thumbs up- |