Reviews for Breaking Dawn My version
elaine2010 chapter 15 . 1/17/2009
when are you gonna post the next one?
hahahahahahahaha chapter 15 . 12/27/2008
Not .;)Muhahahahahahhahahahha!
hahahahahahahaha chapter 5 . 12/20/2008
You wrote Jacob "wince" had called me..., but it's "would". anyways, I love the story so far.:)
piroriparopirirora chapter 15 . 7/20/2008
OMG i need to read the next chapterr please update its awesome :)
noodle95 chapter 15 . 7/19/2008
Your stories are great! I got an account on just for i could enter a review of you stories! I can't wait until your next chapter/part comes out!
UrEveryDayDork chapter 12 . 7/9/2008
omg i love your writing... you have a great sense of humour and the way you make emmet and edward act it so funny...plz keep writing...

it is great...!
Kabtashe chapter 15 . 6/30/2008
wow ive never gotten a bikini wax or anything so i would be terrified. cant wait for the next chapter! keep up the awesome work!
Kabtashe chapter 8 . 6/30/2008
i just wanted to say i loved what Charlie yelled at Edward. sounds like something my dad would do lol.
Raynaexoh chapter 15 . 6/14/2008
OMG! You need to hurry up and get to the wedding! I am so excited to read what happens next. I am really enjoying this story and it is holding me off very well until breaking dawn comes out
gatorzgurl07 chapter 15 . 6/3/2008
sex scene! whoo!

i think it would be cute if bella and edward used like secret ways to comunnicate..

but if your head is already full with the next chapter, that cool too!

i loved this one XD
ToriVampire94 chapter 15 . 6/1/2008
keep going!
cem1818 chapter 15 . 5/31/2008
omg a paper thong! thats so funny! UPDATE SOON! and i bet that will hurt like hell!
movieandbookgirl chapter 15 . 5/31/2008
Good filler chapter. i was laughing at bellas reaction to waxing. i would feel the same way. i vote for a more detailed sex scene. doesn't have to be super long or anything, but longer than "And the night was more than I could have ever dreamed of, as Edward fulfilled all of my desires and more." LOL. I can't wait to read the wedding scene. Please update again soon!
AWiltedRoseSighs chapter 15 . 5/30/2008
Update soon Please!
Spot'sGalFrom1899 chapter 15 . 5/30/2008
I loved it!
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