|Reviews for Three Months|
| Inuclaw chapter 1 . 4/1
you had me laughing so hard
| walkerintime chapter 50 . 1/9
The problem with this story is, that it gives me many new OTPs, that are rare, so there are really not any other stories about them. (﹏)
Thank you for this story, this is my many times re-read and I still enjoyed it wholeheartly. All of the main pairings are just so *chef's kiss*. Chouji and Hinata are so cute together, I was basically cooing during their parts. Kankurou and TenTen have that unexpected sparkle for me, like I didn't know I needed them together, until I read this fic. Gaara and Ino burn like a bright flame I didn't know needed to be lit. Temari and Shino... those two are really something. :D And Sakura and Kiba just makes sense, they just click and it warms my heart.
From side pairings - Naruto and Ayame, oh my! Hokage whos wife is famous ramen chef, just the thing we always needed.
Love this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. . . .
| Guest chapter 50 . 4/23/2021
It is 2021 and I still come back to this story! Gosh it is truly a pleasure and joy to read this story, especially with the pandemic. I hope you are doing okay author and can't wait to hear updates!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2020
Haha there’s actually a fic about Kankuro and tenten, it’s called “little green leaf“.It’s good, I definitely recommend it!
| ClockRepair chapter 50 . 5/28/2020
I read this story years a go and there's probably some of my reviews somewhere in your reviews page. I didn't manage to finish this story back then because this a monster of a fan fiction. Your writing was so fun, yet descriptive and made the story a breeze to read through. You did such a good job balancing such a large ensemble cast of characters and relationships. The subplot where Shino didn't want to get the booster shot because he was wearing Temari's underwear was the funniest to me.
The pairings you've created and their relationships are actually more compelling than some of the ones in canon, which is kind of sad on Kishimoto's part. And you wrote this more than a decade a go!
My favourite couples were Ino & Gaara, Sakura & Kiba, and Hinata & Chouji. I wished Naruto & Ayame and Kakashi & Iruka got some more screen time, but they weren't the main focus of the story anyway. Hanabi & Sasuke were hilarious to read about. I can only imagine how their relationship would be like. It would never be boring with them trying to outwit the other. I liked how you dealt with the more serious parts of Sasuke's history too, particularly with how he interacted with Kakashi. Out of everyone, Sasuke betrayed Kakashi the greatest and you gave their characters so much more development than canon ever did.
The only thing that didn't sit well with me was how everyone got engaged and/or married so fast. The fact that Ino and Gaara realizing they had conflicts over having kids could have been avoided if they didn't rush into marriage or at least talked about it. That didn't sit well with me too. The fact that, at the end, so many of the girls were angry at their partners, but REFUSED to talk to them about the issue and, instead, made them guess what the problem was. I just thought it added drama to Ino & Gaara's, Tenten & Kankuro's, and Sakura & Kiba's relationships when their stories should have been wrapped up already.
| Isomelle7 chapter 42 . 1/1/2020
Just spent my NYE reading this fic, which is an old favourite! Excellent work the perfect amount of romance, drama, that nostalgic first love and heartbreak.
| Reply series chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
Something about this story seems reminiscent of those 80s'/90s' teen/preteen aimed paper backs, like The Saddle Club and The Fabulous Five. ᴥ
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2019
HAHAHA INO AND GAARA, NOW THIS I WOULD LOVE TO SEE
| AoiTorijin chapter 1 . 6/17/2019
This is one of my favorite fanfictions and I come back to read it once every six months or so. You really do a great job proving that any couple can work as long as they put effort into it. For an ensemble fic, everyone gets an equal amount of attention, everyone seems reasonable and in-character, and everyone has some crowning moments of awesome.
| FromTheUnknown chapter 1 . 1/12/2019
Naruto is blew Hinata off? It's easy to forget small shit when fighting an enemy with the eyes of God and a partial kyuubi transformation xD
| XoMidnightXo chapter 19 . 1/5/2019
I haven't finished reading but this chapter is the best hands down
| Guest chapter 50 . 9/24/2018
For a “crack” ship fic, this was really good. Some of the pairings are ones I’ve actually thought about or actively ship. Major kudos. This was a great read.
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/1/2018
Honestly at first I was annoyed and pissed off. That might be because I’m a dude and I feel as if some of the “un-date-ables” were unjustified. I eventually was able to see past that as the un-date-ables are flawed and the story was fine until the dates were chosen randomly. Not to mention the revenge plots. It felt rather petty and my final decision was that neither party, the women nor “un-date-ables” were exactly right, except for the breakups. It is still early into the story and I do hope that at least one relationship is salvaged, which probably should have been the case prior to the events in the story with simple communication. At the very least, Tenten could’ve spoke to Neji or someone could smack some sense into the brick that’s Naruto’s head. Either way, it’s an interesting read, but in my own opinion, I feel as if some things were unrealistic, and unfair with how much it leans towards the girls all finding happiness through chance. Still it’s a great story, no hate. I will have to work on being more open minded. I’m not quite nonjudgmental as I though I was.
| ThassaGoodOne chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
heyyyyyyyyy this is a pretty shit story