I'm not sure why you were nervous about this one... it's absolutely breathtaking. I love the subtleties in this story and the fact that you showed Yuna's growth. I think that's so important not only their ending, but her ending. This is stunning, beautiful. Thank you for this.

That almost made me squeal _. Adorable, beautifully written, and excellent symbolism. You've described and displayed the changes in Yuna, while at the same time showing that she is still Yuna, and they are both stronger together than ever. Wonderful job here.

That was great, very clever. I never thought there could be so many meanings behind calluses.

This is going on my favorites. ;) ~ E. Mentry

I loved how you based this entire one shot in one tiny perfection based on Yuna, it worked really well. And the symbolism worked great.

This is wonderful! I think you really captured all the emotions and questions Tidus might be asking himself when he returned. Beautiful!

Love it! The way you've portrayed Yuna is just beautiful, literally, beautiful XD XD

Awesome, loved it.

ek I love it! I always wondered how Tidus would be with the "new Yuna" and you've captured it very nicely. 5 stars!

Aww! I love how Tidus accepts Yuna for who she is, this stronger person whom she has become over two years. They make such a great couple!

I really loved this because I wonder how Tidus will feel after meeting the new Yuna and how their relationship might change. Great stuff!

Yay, it's such a sweet continuation from the prefect ending XD

I adore the tougher Yuna too! Saves her from too much crying :D

That was... that was really great!

It had a lot of emotion in very few words and it was extremely powerful! Thanks for the good read!

That was good. It was a good idea, and you carried it out well. It wasn't too mushy, as some stories are. Just perfect. Very nice.

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Hey I really like this, dont worry so much

This is extremely well done. You have taken a minor physical change and spun an entire new vision of Yuna out of it. Both the lovers are acurately portrayed and the dialogue between them works as it should. I find not a single fault in this well crafted little story. Bravo!