|Reviews for Constructive Criticism|
| PeaceandluvBBRAE chapter 1 . 9/24/2016
LOVE THE LAST LINE OMFG THATS SO CUTE XD
| Pmason chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Yessss... THEN RAVEN TOTALLY MADE OUT WITH BEASTBOY.
Bea st boy you sneak. Lol.
| MagiJay chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Lol :D that last part tho
| Funny chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
"Hey Raven come read my novel!"-BB
And then Raven totally made out with Beast Boy(last sentence)
*Raven reads that part*
"this is making out"-Rae
| Elaina96 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
best last line ever.
| Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
He would end it like that. Nice story.
| Whisper184 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Hehe, loved it! ;)
| Eternal Optimist chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
What some people would view as gross exaggeration BB sees are Artistic license! LOL very funny!
| Jack Mirembe chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that I love all of your work. You were a really big inspiration to me when I was first lurking around on this site. And...I think that's all. So thanks! :)
| Jin Flows chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
That was cute! I like how in this story and "Mutton" you told the story with Raven being the more aggressive one. I tend to imagine things from BB point of view and lose a lot of what makes his personality with the humor and child-like innocence.
Would love to see more stuff by you!
| TheOneThatAbsconded chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
I added it to my Favorites simply because of the last line. Best part.
| SeventhTatar chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
so i was smiling throughout that whole thing and then at the last little sentance i SNORTED. oops. it was funny though!
| VictoryIsGreen chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
HAHA! I've totally been there! It's awesome. Totally awesome. Nice job dude.
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I'll bet her eyebrows go up to the top of her head when she reads that one! Great one-shot.
| TheEverHummingGirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
That was sweet and funny.