Reviews for Constructive Criticism
MagiJay chapter 1 . 1/1
Lol :D that last part tho
Funny chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
"Hey Raven come read my novel!"-BB

And then Raven totally made out with Beast Boy(last sentence)

*Raven reads that part*

"this is making out"-Rae
Elaina96 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
best last line ever.
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
He would end it like that. Nice story.
Whisper184 chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Hehe, loved it! ;)
Eternal Optimist chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
What some people would view as gross exaggeration BB sees are Artistic license! LOL very funny!
Jack Mirembe chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Hey there! I just wanted to let you know that I love all of your work. You were a really big inspiration to me when I was first lurking around on this site. And...I think that's all. So thanks! :)
Jin Flows chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
That was cute! I like how in this story and "Mutton" you told the story with Raven being the more aggressive one. I tend to imagine things from BB point of view and lose a lot of what makes his personality with the humor and child-like innocence.

Would love to see more stuff by you!
TheOneThatAbsconded chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
I added it to my Favorites simply because of the last line. Best part.
SeventhTatar chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
so i was smiling throughout that whole thing and then at the last little sentance i SNORTED. oops. it was funny though!
VictoryIsGreen chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
HAHA! I've totally been there! It's awesome. Totally awesome. Nice job dude.
titanfan45 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I'll bet her eyebrows go up to the top of her head when she reads that one! Great one-shot.
TheEverHummingGirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
That was sweet and funny.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
aww... I don't know whether too be flattened or creeped out.
Potions for Foxes chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Oh wow!

Love the ending.

THat was hilarious.
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