Reviews for Hopelessly
Sleepless Eremite chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
A Hollywood romance, indeed! This was very in character, and I liked it. The dramatic exit tied things together nicely. Great job. :)
piewacket chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Trousers-

How sad! Poor Olive loving a man who doesn’t love her and not understanding what is going on around her. I only saw the first episode of this series but it was enough to let me follow along.

I laughed at the following line:

“She wished he would kiss her like that, without the plastic wrap of course.”

It made me think about how incredibly weird that would seem to someone who did not know the reason for the cellophane.

Good job.
Vividus chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
"Do not worry you not see me again." That line doesn't make much sense.

Other than that, however, it's really good to me.

Good luck!

-Blackie
AC2 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Not familiar with the fandom, but unrequited love? Oh yes! This story tugged at my heartstrings, as it was meant to. Nice work.

Good luck in the challenge! :)
JavaPoodle chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Aw, a one shot? :( Don't get me wrong, it rocks, but you should continue! It makes such a great plot...I loved it, by the way.
Yorkie Lover chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Aww poor Olive! Ned's such a jerk, to say "Goodnight, Olive" when she said she loved him. Grr!

Sadly, that's what he probably would say. *sobs uncontrollably*

Oh well. Maybe they'll get together one day!

~Yorkie Lover
lotrelves chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Aww...poor Olive and Poor Ned. D: Ned's so confused, and Olive's so brokenhearted. ;_;

Nice story and good luck in the contest!