Reviews for Sanctuary in the Asylum
Jazz2305 chapter 6 . 8/2/2009
OH MY GOD! Fantastic story! I loved how you kept the Buffy ending, as in the whole dichotomy that confuses which version is actually reality. Seriously brilliant, loved reading this! :)
Jazz2305 chapter 5 . 8/2/2009
Lol like how Edward took on the role of Dawn the whiny teenager here - at least it's with less angst than in Buffy. Really enjoying this fic, so well-written :)
Jazz2305 chapter 4 . 8/2/2009
Wow so good how you brought in Bella being in an institution in the past, really makes the possibility of her delusions being real more likely. Love it!
Jazz2305 chapter 3 . 8/2/2009
This is such a brilliant interpretation of the Normal Again story line - so good! Please keep writing this!
Jazz2305 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I so love the idea of this story - Normal Again is one of my favourite episodes of Buffy (and am such a crazy fan that of Joss Whedon that it's borderline psychotic!) Can't wait to read on :)
NemmerlesRaven chapter 6 . 7/25/2009
Wow! That just took me through an amazing rollercoaster ride of my life. My hair was standing on end all the way through. That was one of the most thrilling stories I've every read. I'm extremely impressed! Of course, all of us Twilight fans will stick with the fact that Bella's world is real. Out of all the creative plots you've written, that would have to be one of the best (even though it was from Buffy). The only thing is, (and it really doesn't matter at all), Edward can't even be hurt by a shotgun. Once again, I'm absolutely in shock. A stunner.
Jake-4-eva chapter 6 . 7/24/2009
This was a really awesome story! Great idea!
Atlaxxxx chapter 6 . 7/18/2009
I was totally confused xD Good job :] In my opinion, the Twilight world is the real world. The asylum can screw off :]

Nobody can leave Edward behind xD Ever :] Keep Writing!

xBBx chapter 6 . 7/2/2009
terrific story, i was so tortured as to which side to take and the ending was heart breaking, lovely views as we could flit to either side believing that both were real and see the logic and truth in both sides keeping us questioning.

amazing imagination and visual writing, i couldnt stop reading it!

Mimi-Love-4ever recommended this story and i have to say she chose well, excellent work. :)

vivid.daydreamer chapter 6 . 7/1/2009
Oh My God that was absolutely AMAZING! Thats really all i can say :)
edwardcullenissosexy chapter 6 . 6/23/2009
aw that was so awesome. it was a great story, and I loved it.
Natalia chapter 6 . 6/19/2009
WOOH! i liked the ending :P and she lives happily ever after... Sorta but i dont like the fact that Edward and the Cullens arent real
Bekanz chapter 6 . 6/10/2009
THAT was intense. loved it D
HarlequinRaven chapter 6 . 6/9/2009
Wow. I really liked this, even though, y'know, blatant copying from BtVS. Which is why I wasn't at all surprised by the ending, because - being the huge Buffy fan that I am - I knew what happened at the end of that particular episode. So, sorry, but I can't give you kudos for the plot, since it wasn't yours. However, the writing style was good, the flashing between the realities etc. It's a shame this was a Buffy plot, otherwise I would have thought it to be an incredibly great, original idea.

Raven. x
Sour Then Sweet chapter 6 . 5/31/2009
Love the plot twist at the end. It's like, Bella gets her happy ending ... but she doesn't. We've been rooting for BxE to stay together the entire story, but then we kind of learn that BxE isn't possible in reality. We learn that Bella's life ISN'T actually Bella's life. It's all a dream. I think at some point EVERYONE wonders if their life is actually real or if it's all made up. For Bella, it's the latter. Thanks for writing this!


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