|Reviews for Our Beginning|
| hikarisailorcat chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
aw! such a sweet story! i love it!
| Mizuki1988 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Haha :D A brilliant ending :D Had me in giggles. Good job!
| kumagorox3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
so adorable! LUV IT!
| sasasasasasasasasa chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I love the last sentence very much XD
| Unknown289 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is so cute... I like it... Especially towards the end, it melts me...XD Great job.
| saNyu hIkArI chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
OK, I so did not expect the kiss. Now it's engraved in my memory forever! Agh!
Not that I don't like it but I kind of wanted Akira to be with Nobuta..nvrtheless, great work here! My advice is just not to miz your past and present tense..other than that, it's great!
| Solanaceae2073 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
excellent job! i love how you've incorporated their friendship and the way it is written- is so believable.