Reviews for Our Beginning
hikarisailorcat chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
aw! such a sweet story! i love it!
Mizuki1988 chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Haha :D A brilliant ending :D Had me in giggles. Good job!
kumagorox3 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
so adorable! LUV IT!
sasasasasasasasasa chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I love the last sentence very much XD
Unknown289 chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is so cute... I like it... Especially towards the end, it melts me...XD Great job.
saNyu hIkArI chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
OK, I so did not expect the kiss. Now it's engraved in my memory forever! Agh!

Not that I don't like it but I kind of wanted Akira to be with Nobuta..nvrtheless, great work here! My advice is just not to miz your past and present tense..other than that, it's great!

Later days,

Solanaceae2073 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
excellent job! i love how you've incorporated their friendship and the way it is written- is so believable.