|Reviews for The Quandary of Suzumiya Haruhi|
| Crouching Tiger Hidden Shizuru chapter 4 . 6/25/2008
Fun-tastic fun-tasy. It was nice to read.
| TUNAFishisGood chapter 4 . 1/28/2008
you write awsome stories :D can't wait to read your other one.
| Peter Butchens chapter 4 . 1/5/2008
You are really evil, you know that XD?
Besides that: good story o.o! I want to cry out for a next chapter, but this is the epilogue, so there is little chance of that happening.
Anyway, keep it up
| ichigoskullface chapter 4 . 1/3/2008
Lovely! My criticism from the first chapter seems to have been completely without merit. I was very surprised to find that Nagato's apartment was burning down right there... Good work.
Also, at the end there... The was Nagato was cut off by the nurse... it made me think of something...
"Ritsuko Akagi. The truth is..."
Hahaha... I don't know why I find that funny... but I do.
| Ayje chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Looks good to me, looking forward to next chapter.
| Overlord Marche chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
If this is the only chapter, than yes its a one-shot. But if you ad d more to it than no, it isn't.
I really want to know whats attacking the two. I think its gonna be a good fic.
| ichigoskullface chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Don't worry, your characterization is fine. :)
I thought some of the sentences could use some editing...
"You are not to come this time! You'll just be in the way and lag us behind", for example, sounds very unnatural.
As a whole, your writing is fine, you just need to go over what you have written and ask yourself whether or not it flows nicely.
Doesn't seem like a one-shot at all, but rather a set up for a 'snowed-in with no way of contacting the outside world' type romance.
I hope this was helpful! Keep it up!