i love this fic, it's so good!

dobby

(ok this is gonna be long, didnt post any comments from the very first chapter, cause I knew I would love this story lol and I thought about sending a message in stead but then I though: "Oh no, lets make the other see how amazing this writer is!" atleast to those how will actually read this way-too-long-comment)

so first of all: Why is it that you only have 194 reviews?

this story is amazing! You made everything fit with the book (whats logic I know) but I mean, that everything you managed to made them think perfectly fits in it! If you wouldnt keep saying that you doesnt own Twilight, I would think you are (hmm I must say now Im really getting impatient to see what the rest of MidnightSun will give and how she made it :D)

You really understand each character very well; Edwards inside duel (dont know if its the right term)even if after a time is getting on the nerves that he keeps thinking like that (but it fits him so well!), Rosalies hate/jealousy (I was quite impressed she kept being vicious toward Edward after coming back to the house, but its just like her to only thinks of Her life) Esmes/Carliles joy (héhé can perfectly imagine Carlile when hes really getting angry :D ) ohoh and Alice/Emmet already considering Bella as their sister its totally fit them (lol they are great, even during all the stress he keeps making jokes, all fits all fits ... Im repeating myself sorry) ooh and James & Co, great! (actually I totally forgot about that french side of Laurent, but ... it fits ...okay I will stop here -.- its just too good!)

Ok second now, the bad sides (No? There are?), yeah but just 2,5 well actualy only 1,5 and the other one is just with me ...:

- so in chap 4 Family, when Bella says that Edward can do everything, and Jasper respond with the lost wrestling matches, personnaly I dont think he would lost any of them actually with his mind reading he can react before his opponent do (like in the third book the training with the wolves, his fight ends up with a tie) so he would or win or tie them ... ok so thats just my opinion

now the others, well are actually eng-fr-translation faults , (hé they are important not like typing mistakes!) ... ah they just would make the story perfect, and me happy cause I dont like to see stupid mistakes with my language ... and it would feel like a helped just a little XD

- so chap 12 Uninvited:

Laurent (5) French, "They are more different than I thought!" "Ils sont plus differents que ce que je pensais!"

- and then chap 15 Left Behind:

Laurent (2) French, “It is none of my business” "Ce ne sont pas mes affaires." would sounds better

Oh and "arôme" is perfect!

voilà, I hoped it helped you ... don't think so but it will makes it better to frenchreaders :D

So basically I love your story, and I want ... no I demand that you keep writing it!

Oh and if somebody actually managed to reads all this, spread the word you will make them happy (Im already doing it XD, héhé lets make the world addicted to Twilight!)

(oh by the way I hate you, do you even imagine how addicted you made me of your stories!, I was reading this in stead of studying my exam ... arff love well written stories! XD and I think I will hate you more, cause from what I have read, I can tell that you take a lot of time to update! what basically is equivalent to a ... euhm a strong word for evil ... demoniac, diabolical ... cant find it ...)

Keep writing! (sorry for the long comment -.-, cant help myself)

(... hmm I can still use 6470 characters what can I add ... oh I know, you made me realize that 'quite' from 'not really' (well I think its like that right?) well you write it like that and not like "quiet" how I was actually always writing ... hadnt realized it XD ... well it would looks like a type-fault what it wasnt XD ... ok I will finish here, this is going nowhere Im just making a fool of myself lol)

AGH!

IT IS 2009! CAN YOU PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE? THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST EDWARD POV FICS I HAVE EVER READ! AND I HAVE READ ALOT! UPDATE! NOW! PLEASE! FOR MY SANITY! I BEG OF YOU! I WILL GIVE YOU CHOCOLATE! VIRTUAL CHOCOLATE! JUST PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! :'(

Really good story! Please update soon!

Looking forward to more. D

I really like this and you are doing a awsome job with Edward. I hope you keep going soon.

Love it XD Keep it up!

I love your version of events! please continue when you can!

Its going very well! good job

Very good you write just like Steph meyer!

that was really good.

You have some amazing talent! Thank you so much for sharing these stories with us all. I will continue to read these next chapters tomorrow morning while having my coffee!

~OM~

Is 'ephoria' your new favourite word now?

JK;P

-Tori;)

alright first off this is my favorite Edward version so far and I'm only on chapter one!

I think that the dual hungers idea as a theme and a title was brilliant and I think that it was simply wonderful...I have no other words...just wonderful...

fantastic! :D melissaturkey

I can't beleive I missed this update!

This story is so amazing. Everytime you add another chapter you surprise me with how much you picked up that I've never even noticed in the original books. The tiniest things mean so much from this perspective :)

As always, I'm waiting to read more!

Melissa