|Reviews for Monster and Man|
| vanyali chapter 2 . 7/2/2008
I really love this story, it's nice to see Edward's take on things. And I love the scenes you made up on your own. I suppose Midnight Sun will be somewhat similar. But please, please, PLEAASE update soon!
| EdwardsminessorryBella chapter 15 . 6/27/2008
u r killing me. KILLING ME! please please please finish it! *gets on knees and begs* PLease! i love ur story, and im getting seriously bored here without an interesting story to read... for my sainity, please finish it.
| Bella's long lost twin chapter 3 . 6/22/2008
oh Edward, when will he realize that she loves him just as much as he loves her? I feel bad for Edward, it must be frustrating not being able to know Bella's thoughts, when your used to being able to hear everybodies thoughts around you. He doubt's himself so much, it saddens me. haha, the fact that his human self over powers his vampire self is very...amazing, but very believable. I absolutely loved it!
muahahaha, now for the criticism...
umm...I cant think of anything bad...lets see...you left out some letters like instead of 'thought' you put 'though' but stuff like that doesnt matter to me, its what the story means that is important, not how its written. x]
keep goin girl, your doin great!
| Bella's long lost twin chapter 2 . 6/22/2008
AWESOME! that is soo Edward! I wouldnt be surprised when I go buy Midnight sun, and it is a copy of this! it is so perfect! you are a brilliant writer!
| Bella's long lost twin chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
OMJ! your portrayal of Edward's emotions, of his two selves, WOW! Amazing job! I didnt find a single thing wrong with it! it was all RIGHT!
| gryffindorgal87 chapter 15 . 6/10/2008
Update soon please! I can't wait for the next chapter! ]
| NoMoreThanUsual chapter 15 . 6/8/2008
This gets better every time I read it. Awesome work, KLB! As usual!
| Melody Cullen chapter 15 . 6/8/2008
Oh my Carlisle. I was nearly crying at the end of this chapter! I didn't know if you could make it any better than it was before, but you certainly did! Wow. *wipes eyes* I CANNOT WAIT TO READ MORE!
| Belle07 chapter 15 . 6/7/2008
it was good, i liked how carlisle reacted
| Angeliss chapter 15 . 6/7/2008
I love the way you have built on this conversation from the book. There is so much more perspective, depth, to this than the original, because you can see so much more... Very good. Very, very good. I would be willing to wait just as long for another chapter like this one.
| Shanya-hp chapter 15 . 6/7/2008
wow! great chapter!loved it!
| Angelique chapter 15 . 6/6/2008
This is AWESOME! I love it! I love you, who ever you are!
Please hurry with the next chapter! I'll go crazy!
P.S. Are you going to have Edward realize the Beauty & the beast similaritys? (Bella)
| Jessica chapter 15 . 6/6/2008
its hard to believe how much all of these fanfiction stories are keeping me satisfied until breaking dawn and midnight sun come out.
You must have read very very closely in twilight to understand edwards perspective of everything that goes on. im encouiging you to continue. its quenshing my thirst for midnight sun.
its so good, you could probably do his perspective for all 3 books. please dont quit this -fellow twilighter
| winky23 chapter 15 . 6/6/2008
That was amazing!
| twelveoclock chapter 15 . 6/6/2008
wow... youve got a good plot! keep writing!