Reviews for Monster and Man |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story. I'll check in to see any new updates to it. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was crying at the end when edward left. you are such a good writer. i don't think SM will be able to do better when Midnight Sun comes out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! New chapter! :) Loved it, well done it's a good adaptation. Grr! Rosalie! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEEZ WRITE MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() going to vote now :D anything for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved that you bought french into it! it was to nice to know that my three and a half years learning french paid off after all...i remembered what those words meant! loving this. so very much... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't even begin to explain to you how PLEASED i was to see that you hadn't kept this as a one shot! to find that there are 14 chapters there already waiting for you for a story that you had so instantly fell in love with is...very very happy making :D i love it already. i don't think reading twilight from edward's POV ever gets tiresome. oh and its always nice finding someone else who is as obsessed with twilight as i am ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! Edward cares so much! That's what I love about him! And Emmett...always the cocky one, isn't he? lol! Anyway, it was just another AMAZING chapter! I CANNOT WAIT for the next one! Keep up the good work! -Mel |
![]() ![]() this is my favorite story that was a perfect chap please update soon you are doing so great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am sitting here, stunned. I think this chapter spanned everything from humor to heartbreaking sadness, all held together by the thick sense of suspense. I feel like I just got off of an emotional rollercoaster. Heck, forget emotional. I feel like I got off a real rollercoaster. I cannot wait to see what you have for us next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, goodie, a chapter again. So nice of you to update after so long. Overall, you've done a fairly good job with this, a few inconsistencies with verb tenses, and a grammatical error in the disclaimer (you are not *she*), but not too awful, really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again it was like you stole all this from Stephenie Meyer's head. This writing is impeccable, it paints a really realistic vision of what is going on in Edward's complex mind. It really seems like this could have very well been written by herself, she is amazing and I'm glad you are someone who is incredibly close to her writing style. Please upsate fairly soon. love and loyalty always. brunette-in-black |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS! When I heard Stephenie Meyer was writing Twilight from Edward's point of view I nearly peed in my pants. And then I found this. I was like HALLELUJAH! LOVE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I've read the whole lot so far in about 3 days. lol Get writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! no, u have to think of the next chapter! |