Reviews for Demon Emergence, Shinigami Naruto
puma1sunfire chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
awesome story! I am looking forward to reading the redone version of this story.
Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 10 . 7/26/2011

Kaito hungry want to eat
EDelta88 chapter 3 . 8/17/2008
just for future reference Hinata can't see the Tenketsu and niether can most of the other Hyuuga thats what makes Neji so impressive, that and he has mad skills. Also the tenketsu aren't part of the juuken they're pressure points

you know since Hiashi said he only has Hanabi he's disowned Hinata so he no longer has any power over her, oh the possabilities

you know Sasuke's still a little stuck up but I like the way you're using him

personally the flaming leaf thing was good but felt off. now just plain flames either in a burst or a swirl, I don't care how many people have used it it's totally, completely, and undisputably AWSOME
EDelta88 chapter 2 . 8/17/2008
"I've decided that Naruto is going to date Hinata soon, if you don't like it send me your comments and I will personally disregard your opinion."-I like your style

Sasuke smiled, it's a sign of the Apocalypse! Everyone, to the bunkers!-ROTFWL

the sneezing god, also nice
EDelta88 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
unless they didn't follow the rest of the trend in bleach most of the Hallow's moves, names, etc are in spanish so Cero is really Zero just like Menos Grande means Less Big or Little Big

you might want to go over this some time there are alot of little mistakes that really take away from the story

other then that Nice job, I particularly like the idea of Kyuubi being a former leaf nin though if we go strictly by cannon he was around before even the idea of Konoha existed, but meh I've heard of more far fetched stuff before so who cares
Artfox1498 chapter 10 . 6/10/2008
...dang that sucks... what about the battle with Haku and Zabuza... or Naruto meeting Haku in the forest?
Man Of Word chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Dustin Ambrollo chapter 10 . 6/6/2008
i just put mine on the back burner till i figure out what to do then i do it...
WolfLord04 chapter 10 . 6/6/2008
damn amd I really liked it.
Silver Elysion chapter 9 . 5/5/2008
Really good story so far and i look forward to finding out about Kakashi and Narutos past in the next chapters or so...Anyway hope you will update soon :D
Call0013 chapter 7 . 4/27/2008
Call0013 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
cool can he learn flash step nad does he know the secrect to shadow clone
XxEro-GakixX chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
You dislike Sakura don't you?
BlackRoseFire chapter 9 . 4/16/2008
Awesome story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
10 tailed wolf chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
this is the best friggin story when naruto becomes a shimagimi and it has some sakura bashing in it I give it a 9.9 it is a good story but you should have made her wet herself all together this is a great story
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