|Reviews for Waiting|
| Seinakyou chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I... I don't... -dies-
Dramatics completely aside, that was incredible! So much drama, so much... GAH! IT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I love the portrayal, and the characterization, and the little moments of thought, and how the idea just kind of blossomed in your writing...
That's one of the most well done pieces I've read on this site. Twas loverly.
| celeste chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
aww that's so cute!
| JustAnotherPersonInTheWorld chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
| thefowlisfair chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Oh. My. God.
I cried, and I haven't cried in a fanfic in a long time.
It was awesome, and it's so... /speechless D:/
It's beautiful :)
I love it.
| Kebchii chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Waaaah! So beautiful! ,
c[_] Coffee for your beautiful story! :)
| CatherinexxKC chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Oh angst. How I love it, when it's written correctly. w Just like this piece you have here.
It kept me hanging on to every word, touch and action. Ughh. It was just an amazing read.
-faves- I just love your work. :DDD3
| Tekka Dark chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
i only realized i never read this story after Waiting II just poped up and i started to read it and remebered that i still hadn't read the frist one, and i regret waiting this long...ok that was unintentional, but it worked out well.
i thought it was quite...ok enough with the pomp and the circumstance...its fantastic Kry! legitimately heart wretching, and i never expected her to actaully leave, but damn was that good! im so impressed by that, and quite happy that you did that Kry, because although that one night was special, did not change what happened before, and even though she was going to leave before to get away from him and truely try to live again, she still did that, but as she left she added another reason, to see if he was truly all talk. and although it was said, blatnatly, it showed so much strength in teh character of starfire, which is something i had noticed alot, that starfire simply melts to robin/nightwing and stays melted...but here although she did melt into a puddle, she did not lose who she was or stoped what she believed was the right way for her.
the only thing i thought was weak as nightwings excuse of why he dated so many girls, but i think that might have been on purpose, but im nto sure...but it seems that nightwing, for all his strengths is acutally a slihgtly weak character...once you get past the defences he crumbles and shatters, and seem to be too afraid to lose starfire becuase he loved her, but far too afraid to try anythign incase it did not work. so instead he tried ot make her think that he was interested...childish, but obviously effective...but i acutally really like this portrayal of nightwing...the strong hero, who when it comes down to it, does not know how to deal with his feelings and is scared so much to death of them that he runs away from them, but knows he needs them and what those feelings hold on to inorder to function...but something i noticed in what you could call the "tone" of the character is the change...first when nightwing found out she was leaving, but that was jsut (or atleast ti seemed ot be) the braking down of his supper walls to expose the soft true feeligns of him...but the seconond was veyr subtle, it was hwne he came back. in the writing it and of it self, the character showed change...and this was something that i can only say is the result of wonderful writing. jsut in the tone of the character and the movements there in, even in the way the character speeks we cna see the miles of change that took place, and its so very subtle, its like we read it nad understand it but we don't even register that is, but we know ti happens...your writing ability is absoltuetly fantastic, and teh fact that this is old, means that not only have i not been around for far too long, but that knowing you Kry, you've gotten even better.
the way you expressed the feelings of the characters was simply awsome...i got litereally teary eyed a couple of times, because not only is the emotion raw, but its honestly feels so realistic, that you cna't help but empathize.
and as always the sensual scene, for it was not a simple sex scene was a wonderful mix and passion, anilmistic desrie, tender love and affection, and a good does of plane ol' sexy.
honestly this was a wonderful story Kry, with a slightly new way to look at the characters, i feel, and hoenstly a wonderful and interseting way at that..it was an awsome read taht really pulled at my heart strings, and really surprised me. i loved it XD
now i cna't wait to read the sequal XD
take care, Kry
| scarlettblush chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
I read this shit years ago. Took me effin forever to find it again. But, the point is, YOU'RE AN EFFIN GENIUS!
I love the shit out of this. I was a hard core Teen Titans fan when I was a teenager. Obsessed like mad with it, particularly Robin. Every Thursday I'd watch the thing on cartoon network like a nerd, and reading this brings back all the memories. I was always pleased that you'd never turned this into one of those cheesy stories that lack articulation. This had depth, you gave these two qualitite swhich were so easy to empathise with. You made them human, not just characters.
I like the ending, the sweet scent of hope at the end. I'm glad that you didn't outright give them this happy ending. The hope is enough for it to be wonderful.
Love, love, love it.
| CYRA1104 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I am utterly speechless in such great ways. It's such a fantastic piece of literature! X"3
| Xo Soaring Star Xo chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
OMG *Cries* This is so beautiful!
So sad and so beautiful!
I cried so hard when she left Richard! :'(
Couldn't help but tear up when she called him Richard at the end!
I LOVE it! LOVE IT SO MUCH!
| serena-girl chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Aww, man. This one actually let a tear go...Nice fic! (i can't believe I almost cried!)
| SpiritxXxWildfire chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
OH I REALLY REALLY LIKED IT! HOW WONDERFUL! It was different, very very good!
| AlarmedMouse chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Woah! i really really liked this story its was great im speachless :D
| Kikwoka chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
aw, now that's just cute _ and Nightwing is so screwwed up (
I still love ur way of writing things ;)
| Star of Airdrie chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
A wonderful one-shot, although a follow up would be great. I have read this many times sorry I haven't reviewed it until now.
The characters have such great depth. It is so angsty but in a great way. A semi-happy ending - definitely! Another brilliant piece! Thank you Kryalla!