Reviews for Waiting
TeenTitansFreak9939 chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
that was a truly amazing story, i was completely enthralled by it. It was so good...(that's not a strong eonugh word though)
cherrisoda chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Okay, I just NEED to rave about this!

I've read this storyMANY MANY TIMES! Each time I cry...Each time I want more! Each time I think things are going to go differently...But no. But I LOVE IT!

I really do hope you make more rob and star fanfics. You're extremely good.
RomanceDramaAzngrl chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
That was an a amazing story!

Bravo! Bravo!

Good Job!

sweet.octOber.kisses chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
loved it!
D-I-WaRrIa chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
This story is so amazing that it just demands a review.

Really, really, should be doing my coursework.

But I really love Starfire's perspective on everything, and the whole waiting theme, mirror imagery and overall tone was spot on.

Great job.

6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Wow...that was amazing. I loved how you wrote the scene where you broke things off between Rob and Star. It would have been lame if she stayed the first time. Great dialog and I love how things turned out at the end. Keep up the good work!
Boxxer-auction chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Beautiful story. I love how Starfire is mature in this and it's realistic, with the portrayal of her leaving him and all. But then ending was the icing on the cake! I love how you've left the possibility of them getting back together again. One of my favourite stories for sure!
Angeladex chapter 1 . 4/17/2008

But the...

and the...




(Imagine me doing this throughout the entire fic.)

Wonderfully written! And if I may say so...Woah.

I've NEVER read its equal. And I'm a freakin' fanfiction WHORE.

I commend you on a job well done, characterizations nailed spot on, keeping up with the unique Teen Titans universe from the cartoon and mingling it perfectly with some comic canon, giving Cyborg some love, and remembering Silkie! Not to mention the fact that there was a plot.

*dies blissfully now*

~Ayaia of the Moon
theRavenintheStudy chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
(Appears in black ninja-poof) Joboco Kry! Well, incase you read this before you read my Dev-art message, I've had major computer trouble latly, and this site would never work when I tried to get on. Any way, now I would go and review all of your stories I havn't yet, but where I live it is currently 12:45 Saturday morning, and I have something to do at about 10:00 in the morning, so I'll do this one before going to bed. This was amazing. It was like the emotional rollercoster that OCC and LH where, but all compacted into one smaller package! I really loved the ending by the way. Let me just say one thing that I think you may have heard by now: You deserve to own Teen Titans, because you are without a doubt one of the most awsome beings in this universe! Although, I think I did find a few grammatical errors that were probably not just a cultural diffrence (I am American by the way), but I am to lazy to go through this thing to find and write about them. Any way, I'm going to say good by for now, and I will review the other stories, if my computer decides to still be working when I wake up. Any way, Koboco (Good-bye in my fictional language) Kry, savol das mala (term of adimiration, translates into "one of great skill") (Dissappers in black ninja-poof)
fewch-chan chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
I, at one time, had already reviewed this story but I just wanted to review now that I've gotten comfortable in my old account. This story was great. I really loved the ending; I was surprised that she didn't stay after Robin told her how much he loved her (and when he SHOWED her also), so it kept me hanging from my seat as I read through the remainder of the story.

This story must be a favorite.
jessica.brooke chapter 1 . 3/26/2008

This beautiful!

Unlike the M stories I've accidentlly stumbled on ( thinking back I normally dont read the lemon fics ) this was a great story... I loved it! Good luck on your novel btw! XOXO xStarfirexRobinxo
reginaqueen chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
audrey chapter 1 . 3/19/2008

im glad you wrote this

its very different from your other stories
punk-rock-chick chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
aW tHiS wAs vErY sWeEt & sAd i jUsT lOvEd iT

aWsUm jOb! )
TheUltimateCokeBear chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I think I remember reading this over briefly when you first posted it since I think I had to do something else... anyways, I reread it and it's like, AMAZINGLY agnsty for a stand alone type thing. Which is great, because I partiulcarly like hanging open endings in fics(but not in movies. xp).

I like how you ser up the beginning; it was nice and easy and told the setting without this huge boring paragraph about "Raven left, Beast Boy followed, they got married, Star and Rob are the only ones left..." xD

And the transition in Nightwing; so sad.. D; Gah, it's like he's becoming a younger Batman instead of the Nightwing we all know and love, lawlz.

Their argument really put the angst in this. xD OMFG SHE DROPPED THE F-BOMB. -falls over- I can understand it though, because Nightwing's being a man-bitch. (KIDDING, kidding. xD)

Ah, and he finds out that however good they may be, kisses do not fix everything. x'D And this first time of theirs is noticably differnt than in OCC... I just found that interesting. xD

And then she runs off to the City of Love... did you do that just for the sheer irony of it! xD But seriously, it's a nice life she built. AND her comic book career (which I continually love you for, lawl), nice touch. DD

Haha, Dick definetly enjoyed that show, fersure. Poor guy, having to see her modeling all this stuff and not being able to say hi or anything... -heartbreakforDick- And her misunderstanding his ignoring her... crap, that turned out badly. D:

Aw, the ending was bittersweet and very perfect. Loveloved it, great job Kry. ;D
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