Reviews for University
JeannetheCat chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I liked this, but, don't you think Aly's a little bit too... perfect? I would think Thom, probably the most scholarly of Alanna's children, would have no trouble translating a language, while Aly would excel in the speaking of a language, but not really the written form.

Just a thought, and this was a very well written fic.
e13 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
please continue
Storm Warning chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
hee hee is what i think!
xDarklightx chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
I like your story.
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
haha - very funny and good - i hope you write more :)
sophia666 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Ah, I love the Cooper family. Great writng.
tortallanrider chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
That was cute. Reminds me of my relationship with my brother, in a strange way. Only my brother is 5 years younger! I liked it.
Ayalim chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Oh, I loved this. Aly is perfect- flirty and laughing and careless of her brother's feelings in the matter. I would love to see more. Only one problem- be careful of what tense you are writing in. The constant changes made MY head ache!

Example: "...he EXPLAINED. Aly GLANCED at the papers. They ARE WRITTEN in a foreign language, one she KNOWS quite well. The girl GRINNED wickedly.
MarauderetteLily chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
poor thom! though im with aly on this one! good chapter! update plz. ciao
Kairi's-twin chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
I love this. You captured Aly perfectly. I love the part at the end with Thom and how she can translate the scroll in her head and he has soo much trouble with it. I really like it and I hope there is more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

~Kairi's Twin~
lebaneseprincess chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
I absolutely love this! it has a very promising begining. there definitley not enough aly fics out there and she's my favorite tp heroine! anyway, good job keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens to this nates of whining brook!
Unknown Scribe chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
hahahaha. I love it.
Rauros Falls chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
That was really cute! :) I haven't found many fics about this side of Aly. I wish you would expand on this.

Umm.. as constructive criticism, I found a couple of confusing or unclear. However, it's late and that might just be my brain malfunctioning.

Keep up the good work!
SarahE7191 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I thought it was cute. Too bad we don't get to see more of Nate (even if Aly does end up with Nawat :)