Reviews for Naruto's Evolution
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Sage Of Six Path chapter 8 . 7/19/2014
U have messed this story after chap 3 and 4. The romance seemed to be leaning into Hinata more then Sakura and I have been recently fed up with this stupid affection there showing with the stupidest training sessions they have. Comedy doesn't suit you if u keep making Sakura the same as she was with the only difference that she likes hin. Would advise to have equal romance with both Hinata and Sakura. 1st got me so hyped and now it feels so terrible. Do more Naruto being dominant and quit it with the inner hinata, not everyone needs it -_-
PussyPounder21 chapter 10 . 6/12/2014
Dude wtf... you fucking ruined the whole series with this bullshit... why would you that...
FaggotSlayer chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
kingrobert84 chapter 21 . 2/19/2014
doin awesome man whens update?
misteryman526 chapter 21 . 7/28/2012
I'm really hoping you're going to continue writing. Your idea of the wind element is very unique and makes for a fascinating alternate Naruto. Do you plan on Naruto being the only one to reach this level of elemental manipulation? I could see Sasuke trying to match it (he's got Suigetsu, who already has the water transformation to help him, after all). I can just see an insane fire elemental Sasuke meeting Naruto head-on causing mass devastation...
you cant hide itif you do that chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
OK so don't say (naruxhina or naruxsaku) in description if you list the story as a naruto & hinata fanfic

jesus you gave it away and now i cant even start to read your story without already knowing the "secret" pairing

...whatever hope this will be good
Evie Glacier Tako chapter 21 . 2/4/2012
Wonderful chapter. I liked most of it but some of the Naruto/Hinata conversation confused me a little too much. I understood what was going on but it seemed randomly placed and somewhat out of context. Perhaps if you tried to write the scene without all the flashbacks and pauses, and fancy thematic/dramatic paragraphs in between thought (from "Naruto never wanted to do that again" to the end). Maybe if you had chosen a different time, after all there was chaos going on in the dinner room, and I think it was at an awkward time. I hope you plan on updating though so please. I want to know what's going on with Sakura.
K chapter 21 . 12/9/2011
I find this story really interesting. Please update soon.
007420 chapter 21 . 12/7/2011
wow thats awesome story bud please continue i like to read more
stormingnight chapter 21 . 8/29/2011
oh lord this story is so epically awesome... pure and total awesomeness
NaruHinaFan chapter 21 . 8/4/2011
Yes Hinata! Update Soon
Raphmaster14 chapter 8 . 7/30/2011
is this a sakura bashing story because your making sakura act weird and bad things are happening to her and since this is a naruto and hinata fanfic and sakura loves him... is it?
dbtiger63 chapter 18 . 6/26/2011
That was another beautiful display of Naruto's new connection with wind! You should really complete this story because you've written a funny, dramatic, action packed story that is very fun to read!


dbtiger63 chapter 15 . 6/25/2011
That was the COOLEST display of mastery of wind I've ever read! This chapter was great and I hope many more follow.

Hinata and Sakura working together shows it's not impossible for them to co-exist. It won't be easy but any other way hurts the one the love the most.


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