|Reviews for Dreams of an Angel|
| SayaKisaragi Blood chapter 24 . 1/20
This was the best I swear to God I love that you did a great job. I'm glad you made this one and a sequel you're the best.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
why not make it romance?
| MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
Why does everyone have their speech between apostrophes while his are between quotation marks?
| Rose1948 chapter 24 . 1/28/2012
Wow... Finally found this again after losing it after reading Chapter 16. Wow. It's so damned sad. Poor Ranma/Cloud. Still, I'm glad you didn't pair him up with Akane. Even in the manga, she's a controlling and abusive bully. The rest of the fiancees aren't much better, either, treating Ranma as a thing and not a person.
Congratulations, sweetie. You've written one of the few fanfics that made me cry. I'll be starting your sequel tomorrow as it's almost midnight for me.
Take care and thanks ever so much for sharing.
| Riverlia chapter 11 . 11/18/2011
I was intrigued by the idea, but I don't like the execution.
You practically 'killed' the Ranma cast, pushing them to the side line, and by that I mean all of the Ranma cast, including Ranma.
Most of the fic was practically bits of FFVII told from the eyes of a Cloud with a huge crush on Aeris. Whatever personality Ranma has get brutally gagged and stabbed, repeatedly, so that he quickly become Cloud-like (which is a stark contrast with Ranma's happy go luck attitude).
Ranma lived his entire very-eventful life as Ranma. With Cloud's memory, his self will have to change with the extra experiences, but it won't become an Cloud clone like this, as there is no reason 'Cloud' is more important than 'Ranma' for a reincarnating soul. Even if 'Cloud' has left a strong impression on the soul, at best it would be just that, an impression with somewhat more influence.
Lastly, I can believe Ranma beating the rival using Omnislash because, well doh, that was an Omnislash performed by Ranma. But he was the weakest incarnation?
You do realize that, without Materia, Ranma can pretty much wipe the floor with the FFVII cast, don't you?
He can out-speed an opponent who can dodge lightning bolts, consistently beat up someone who can lift 400 tons at the beginning of the story and survived flame that can melt stone from a distance. Even in Advent Children, none of the characters could create craters in bedrock with casual physical attacks the way Ranma and Ryoga do.
| rajvir chapter 24 . 9/19/2011
am amazing and sad love story I loved it great job.
| Farmer Kyle chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I really liked this intro chapter and am anxious to see where this goes! I also also really liked your summary, it was eye-catching!
| Blackholelord chapter 23 . 4/10/2011
Depressing. All that hard work, and yet no happy ending. I was hoping that she was recarnated as Kasumi, both are so similar.
| Hishin Trueflame chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
damn such a shame i would so read this if you were a cloti instead T_T
| Hammerchuckery chapter 24 . 11/17/2010
Wow. You have created one awesome story! Gonna see that sequel now.
| Ranma XLR chapter 24 . 10/26/2010
Epic read! This has got to be one of the most meaningful fanfictions out there!
Thank you for this treat.
| NCPrezMike chapter 24 . 6/19/2010
I would go into detail where I've been, but I'm going to guess you might not see this anytime soon, so I will save it for when I read the chapters you have already written for the sequel.
Glad to see after a year of being gone from that you continued, and completed this fanfiction, and glad to see that seemly you are continuing on with writing this story, and fanfics in general. I missed reading your fanfics.
On a side note...when Ranma/Cloud said "..I lied" and picked his first life over his current life, is it wrong of me that the Cleris in me wanted to yell out "YES!"
LOL, well...glad things worked out for you it would seem, and hopefully you'll be hearing my thoughts on this fanfics sequel soon.
| W'-Raito-'W chapter 23 . 5/9/2010
OMG I love this story plz make sequel or something
| enderverse chapter 23 . 4/29/2010
I can only think of a couple options for clouma to pursue, get geostigma cured so he doesn't go through flawed reincarnation anymore, or kill everyone on earth so that there is no one to reincarnate into or just get completely obliterated from existence body and soul.
| Orchamus chapter 23 . 2/5/2010
This was absolutely amazing. Touches the heart to think of such devotion.