Reviews for Naughty Girl
Animefangir1 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This was great!
Amberlynn chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Very nice :)
kidloco chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
amazing one and hotness :D

like much
Mizuchilove chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
SlytherinBlack29 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Anime Freak456 chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
I really liked this story! It was really sexy and you did a great job. I like your writing style. This was very well written. There no errors anywhere that caught my eye. Keep up the good work
K A A Y O chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
I only have one word: Awsome!
Ophelia Hall chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Wonderful story. You did very well. :)
sapelak chapter 1 . 6/27/2009

i have always been a fan of kibasaku and people called me crazy.

i curiously read this and really enjoyed. i was the best one that i have ever read, and i sometimes wish naruto would turn into this type of show. lmao.

very well doe and ill be looking forward to more from you. if you want ideas, im full of them!

Hatake Tsughi chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Wow that was really good writting. Great job!
Lady Comare chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
smexy ;) :D :P i luv it _
Lellian chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
This was a lovely piece - sensual and realistic, without the pornish elements that many bad authors add in. I enjoyed it - Kiba's a growing interest for me, though I write him in a very different way from you. This isn't at all a bad thing - I actually adore reading different takes on characters, particularly ones which don't receive all that much character development within the actual manga.

Positively, your prose is beautiful and very evocative. You write sex well - it's a rather frank compliment, but it's a difficult thing to do.

Things to improve on...not much. Obviously, this was designed to be a one-shot, but it would have been nice to see a little more character development - just where this chemistry between them came from, or why Sakura likes him the way he does.

It still remains a beautiful piece. A definite favourite. Thank you for producing it.
FoxFireNight chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Oh My God! Kiba is so sexy! thanks for this little piece of joy!
1234qwer chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Great job! Please write more KibaSaku.
DestructionQueen chapter 1 . 1/22/2009

Simply said.

You should definitely write more KibaSaku stories.
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