Reviews for Wake Up
Lauren Andrea chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Shame! I told you, I'm a total Cloud-comforter! I just want to hug him to pieces! This was spectacular, despite the shortness. I love it to bits! Great one shot.
StrifeMe chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
that was so cute :D made me cry :') the words you chose were so meaningful and the idea was so good. It was short but effective :D
papatte chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
Aw, this is heartbreaking... And the emotions are really well conveyed through your words. Beautiful work, really.
DreamlessRiver chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
aww, poor Cloud and Zack! gotta go read the next chapter.
DreamlessRiver chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
oh my god! this is so cute! are you going to continue? please do!
City of Dis chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
nicely done...i think i inspired something...yay for me! but seriously a great job on clouds thoughts. I really like it and have a firm held belief that zack talks to cloud all the time we just dont know it...
xLilly White chapter 2 . 1/5/2008
Aw... I'm listening to some Delerium while reading this, and it's almost making me teary-eyed. :) Glad to see you're still writing away! If you're going to continue this, you probably should put these two small chapters into one, so that then you don't have a big pile of 8-liner chapters. It's up to you, though- I'll admit it makes a stronger effect, the chapters being so short, and there's more drama, but if you were to make this into a long chaptered thing, if I were you I'd make the chapters longer. :) Just a bit of advice! And, of course, it would be cool to see more of this.

Hope to hear from you some time!

- winter x
xLilly White chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
WHOA. Short but, so poignant! I almost keeled back on my chair when I finished reading those shattering 8 lines. :) Really. And I love the descriptions... the words you use- I would never have thought to put it like that. Nicely done! Let's see the second chapter...
LastTrojanNight chapter 2 . 1/4/2008
Aw, You're too sweetD Thank you!

I like the way you pointed out that Zack really strongly wanted to live...

I never quite thought of that part, it makes it all the more tragic...

I can feel my cellular integrity degrading...

LastTrojanNight chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
*sob* Zack's death always turns me into an over emotional puddle of goo. And you do an excellent job of describing what Cloud is going through. So yah, happy me;)