|Reviews for Life|
| LizDaKILLER chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
thats was great! your really good at this!
| nopoodles chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
I'm terribly sorry to criticise but the sentance, the lost of love, the lost of hope, the lost of life, the lost of once happieness doesnt make sense, shouldnt it be the loss of love the loss of hope the loss of life the loss of once happieness.
| SockMonkey101 chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I like it. It's really deep and all.
But what does it have to do with Posion? By Chris Wooding?
I thought that this would be it.
| goolsbygirl chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
beautiful i just loved it
| Autumn Skys chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
It's good, although really I'm not quite sure what it is.
I read a book called Poison by Chris Wooding, is that the Poison archive that this is in?
But your poem is very deep and well written!