|Reviews for Just In Time|
| fanfictionallibrarian chapter 2 . 11/17/2008
My first M rated BB piece, and wow. You did amazing! You kept them both in good character, espacially Bren. I'm impressed since you stated you didn't have a lot of expereince with this rating when you wrote this.
Looking foward to more stories!
| Insert Something Memorable chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
"What could have been obscene, wasn't." is pretty much a dead on description of this story.. You write M rated stuff so well! This was just..hot. I don't know how else to describe it. I giggled even after just reading the summary, and it only got better from there. Definitely favourited.
| fanofbones chapter 2 . 2/26/2008
Holy wow...and holy cow...and holy crap...
this was amazing...hot...sexy beyond words...fun...
and did I mention hot? Mother of God hot?
I de-clare, I think I need a fan...and gasp...at my age ;-) Don't really think you need practice there missy, god help us if you did! Hell, I might have to look words up! ;-)
I always love when Booth reminisces...so hot his descriptions of Bren.
When Bren says "Show me"...I nearly fell off my chair..
When Booth says "Yeah, though it was more like I had to do it." mother of god, sexy, she should have melted right there
Promises promises, Booth
I intend to keep all my promises to you.
I freaking adored this...wonderawesome
| mag31 chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
Ah there's even a chapter 2! I'm SO late... Okay then...
'You look like one of those old-fashioned pictures you find in necklaces' Aw now that's sweet!
'Brennan fucked the way she did everything else—with skill, passion, honesty, and something Booth had come to realize was a peculiar kind of grace.' I thought this was a brilliant line.
Well, this was very well written, you never cease to impress me!
| mag31 chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Fiction Rated: M
Summary: Brennan's away Booth takes matters into his own hands.
*eyes wide in shock, then burst out laughing*
(now that's a good summary because I'm already laughing my ass off)
Haha yeah, just in time! I guessed it would be something like that ;)
Well, poor Booth, I almost shared his despair, but look, everything happens eventually!
| boneskittie chapter 2 . 1/10/2008
"I could tell you enjoyed that." Booth wasn't surprised by the way her eyes danced.
"That's 'cause you're very observant."
"Naturally. I am a scientist, after all."
"Yup, you're a squint. My squint," he said with a smile.
I so adore how you write these two together. Oh - and LOVED the hot stuff, too.
| hmfrongillo chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
yay! you wrote more!
Unussual request on Brennan's part, but i cant disagree with her! Hot!
| naeo99 chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
What no chapter 3? Great story by the way. HOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOT
| seeleysangel chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
How do you do it? Make it so hot but so incredibly sweet at the same time!
| LocoGreggo chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
Holy crud. I...I have no words. Wow. Great writing. Honestly,
that was just...again undescribable (but in a good way). Your
twisted. We have t-shirts. LOL!
| LocoGreggo chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
O...she nailed you. LOL! Great chapter on a new story.
| DOC3 chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
Frank language and raw sexuality are never a bad thing, particularly in small doses such as this. We write about characters that are fake, so it takes that much more skill to make the situation they are in seem real when they are not. And you did that here. And *huge grin* it doesn't hurt when she really is a pretty as a cameo, and he is, well, I think raw sexuality personified sounds like a good description. ;)
| Rae Tamwood chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
OMFG, that was so damn hot! When she asked him that, I was like O.O...Wow!
| Serienjunkie 91 chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
Really great! I hope you write more that would be pretty awesome.
| danireed chapter 2 . 1/6/2008
you did an awesome job