|Reviews for Remains of yesterday|
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/26/2015
It's a game of cheeses when will the board be set
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/25/2015
Some action new players and no answers . . . Cliffhanger
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/24/2015
Out of the frying pan into war
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/23/2015
The cliff hanger is strong with this one
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/22/2015
There is alot of back and forth it building my tension
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/22/2015
I like this chapter, it has a clear discription of elric's transformation
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/22/2015
It's nice building up here, they're is a Definite pace to this story
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Nice beginning with hunger for the unknown
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 26 . 11/23/2014
Priceless ending. I hope you show us Al's reaction some time.
| a fan chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Can't wait for the sequel!
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 6 . 11/22/2014
What did they mix Maes with? I think a bird of prey would be an excellent choice.
| FindingThatDamnedOnePiece chapter 18 . 2/1/2014
SO LONG! I'm reading rest later! DAMN!
| Mudkips-cuteuselessannoying chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
The plural for a tooth is teeth, not teethes. Don't worry about me, just a grammar nazi passing through.
| Quill and Blade chapter 14 . 2/13/2013
I can't be bothered login in, but I HAD to say this. The following line completely cracked me up:
"For all she knew the man was most likely enjoying the night with a beautiful blonde or brunette, or both, her imagination supplied helpfully"
*snerk* oh, if only she knew...XD
Good story so far. I like the characterization, and I'm wondering who would give the order Mustang is referring to.
| Hellotoday chapter 12 . 1/28/2013
I love this!