|Reviews for Secrets,shame,storms and stripclubs|
| tokio33 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
you need to space outthe paragraphs to make it easer to read
and i dont care if i spelled that wrong
| 1711AdvenaAvis chapter 5 . 1/28/2009
Very funny the ending. XP
| Deactivate This chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I really liked this story. I think that if you felt like it, a story about Bella teaching Rosalie would be very good.
| Purpleite chapter 4 . 8/28/2008
before i start oi would olike to apologize fore my spelling errores, my right hand is splinted, soo sorry...i love your story, iw as in hystrical laughter ther whole time abd i alsso lover your name
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 5 . 8/27/2008
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
kay now i would like to say its a little confusing too read the way you formated it but not imposible and edward has no blood in his head
| tohruxkyoxyukilover chapter 5 . 7/21/2008
wow thats great! very impressive! keep writing i loved it!
| OverMyPileOfAshesInforcer chapter 5 . 7/11/2008
OMG, that was hilarious!
hey, what was Bella's strip name?
| Maya Swan chapter 5 . 3/30/2008
Great story very oringinal! Please update!
| alange chapter 5 . 2/6/2008
oh my gosh thast was awesome I loved it and the end was so adorable!
| RockstarLife chapter 5 . 2/1/2008
YOUR KIDDING RIGHT? ROSALIE, WAS ASKING BELLA THAT? WERID! AWESOME JOB WITH THIS STORY! :-D
| Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 5 . 1/29/2008
I loved it all! I'm sad that it's over :( it would be so cool if you did more on this one it's a really good story, good job keep it up. XD
| Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 3 . 1/29/2008
oh I love this story! now on to read more... XD
| Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I like it so far and I can't wait to read more. XD
| mattybabe chapter 5 . 1/25/2008
This is going realy well! keep this up i realy want to see what happens with rosealie :). one thing, it would be good with longer chapers but still realy good.