Reviews for Puzzled Proposal
Bhria-hime chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
YEAH!]

awesome story!
XxSilver-TwilightxX chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
haha i love that!
extraordinaire chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Aw! That was really cute!
just another fma fan chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
xD I hate writing in present tense too. Great story though. Cute! Keep writing, k?
coconutmandarin chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
*coos at the cuteness of this*
vikkaayBYAH chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Mwahahah. I liked it! Cute plot; puzzle rings would be funny and unique nowadays. -heart-
cherryjubilee chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Very sweet... and the ring sounds gorgeous...
neon kun chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I actually liked your ending.

and that's to say a lot, i'm very picky with endings.

so you used present tense, eh? practice on it. although it wasn't horrible-i could keep up- there were moments were my focus lapsed due to a debate in my head if a is in concord with b and stuff like that.

anyway, it was nice.

neon kun
UchihaSasukeluva4eva chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
lol i luv this story, typical Sasuke!
Ta Ta For Now chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I love it! It's so cute! XD

TA!

-CalwynN.
Lady Rinarii chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Kyaa!

Totally loved it.
Miko-chan chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
WAH!

UCHIHA SAKURA.

THAT NAME, I SWEAR, SOMETIMES WINS OVER HARUNO SAKURA.

IT RHYMES. AND ITS VERY, VERY PRETTY.

Hahahaha, Sasuke giving a puzzle ring to Sakura to avoid the embarrassment of going through all the hassle in proposing to such a troublesome woman. XD Testing if she's a suitable wife, hah! (Excuses, excuses, Uchiha.)

XD Love this cute drabble. *me hugs it till death*
Bored Konoha Kunoichi chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
_ that was very cute, and funny-

realistic, too.

It's something that Sasuke would actually do, really :)

I loved the SasuSaku moment in the end-

you have a very nice way of writing humor; without going OOC, or too unrealistic :D

Nice job, and keep up the good writing!

-Bored Konoha Kunoichi
secondbutton chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Haha. I can sympathize with present tense hatred. x]

I liked your last line, it was a great jab. Hehe.

Well done.
diet coffee chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
That was so cute and brilliant! Good job!
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