Reviews for Take A Breath
WolfGirl chapter 17 . 6/19/2015
I really loved this story! I also really liked the twist(I might write a private sequal for only me to read..). I watched this(national treasure) in social studies class for the last 2 days and immediately fell in love with Riley. I had to ask my teacher his name though and I was afraid she would ask why XD you can't exactly say to your teacher, "I'm going to look up yaoi fan fiction on the internet so I can read it. Its a hobby of mine." Luckily, she didn't or else I would have burst out with a lame lie or the truth... Anyway, I overall really liked the ending and the entire fic! You did a good job! *offers a hug*
Guest chapter 17 . 9/3/2014
IS THERE A SEQUEL OMFG. I LOVED THIS. IT WAS AMAZING AND I JUST WANT TO REREAD IT ALL OVER AGAIN! I need more Briley fics omg. I've just been obsessing over them and it's so hard to find good ones like this! I loved i ttttttsjsjskkskskskkskskndjdbdbdndhenjs
Sketchy-d00d chapter 17 . 6/17/2014
Sequel please! Oh my gods I want to know where the map leads! -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 16 . 6/17/2014
Yay! I'd never wish him dead but now he can't hurt Riley anymore. -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 15 . 6/17/2014
*slaps Ian* dude... Not even funny. *to Ian* I really hate you. -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 14 . 6/17/2014
Yay! They kissed! -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 13 . 6/17/2014
I loved the ending XD -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 12 . 6/17/2014
Poor Riley... *sighs* -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 11 . 6/17/2014
What about Ben and the bullet in his shoulder...? -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 10 . 6/17/2014
French! *hides* I'm sad that Riley got hurt. Where the FBI when you need it!? -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 9 . 6/17/2014
I really hate Ian... -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 8 . 6/17/2014
:D as soon as he placed his hand on Riley's knee I was over here saying "Kiss kiss kiss" then they did and I was like "Awww yeah" XD -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 7 . 6/17/2014
I want Girl Scout cookies now... XD this is really good. -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 6 . 6/16/2014
I hate Ian... A lot... -Cat.
Sketchy-d00d chapter 5 . 6/16/2014
Again, I must point out "its wonder it didn't snap in two.". You forgot 'a'.

What? Is he really in New York? I'm lost... -Cat.
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