|Reviews for Legacy|
| phoenix360 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
This was an awesome fic. Very sweet and touching. My only criticism would be the Japanese words thrown in as well as the Japanese spelling for the character's name. I understood it perfectly, but it was still kind of jarring, and also because I grew up with the dub version, so it just doesn't feel right.
Apart from, loved it!
| too-much-inspiration chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Very nice, brings a tear to the eye. I always love reading family stories like these. Sometimes you just need a little something sweet.
| JC-zala chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Made me warm and fuzzy all over...
Seriously, that was heartwarming. I've always thought it was kind of sad that Goku never got to meet his father, sad that Bardock never got to hold his son. How I wish this fic would be a real episode in the series.
I really like the reunion. You've set everything just right.
| Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Oh yes. Very nice. I love that Goku got mad on behalf of his father, they all got to eat and laugh together and say what they could. Goku has a lot of pull on the other side. I wouldn't be surprised if he didn't come pull his father out of there someday.
| Cantrona chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I really loved this!
it brought tears to my eyes. ')
I sometimes forget how Goku actually is when around people, so carefree and childish haha.
This really made me smile more than anything. It made me laugh and it also made me sad thinking on how Bardock will never be able to see Goku again.
Also, having this written in the Japanese format really made it seem like the anime since i'm so used to the english dubbed version. Like Gokou and Bejiita instead of Goku anf Vegeta. I think it gave the story a nice feeling to it D
| SuperSaiyanInfinity chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
This is a great story! It's really good.
| Crystalzap chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
awww, well I think you kept everyone in character :)
| Jago Li Son Shiranui chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
This story was amazing, damn I have to admit that it brought me to tears! Great Job!
| LuminiaAravis chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Uwaaah! Made me cry! I see you took a lot of time to write this, and it shows - it's very good. Thank-you!
| gekofan776 chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
This was an amazing story... even though there a few spelling errors, actually only one.
| Bob'sCookie chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I love it! I want to cry but my inhuman lack of emotions prevents that. Anyway, you should have had Goku and Bardock spend their "day" in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber aka The Room of Spirit and Time. That way their "day" would have become a year of much needed, tragically deprived, father-son bonding. And I love how you used the Japanese version of the characters. I think maybe Goku's brain damage is a little more severe in the Japanese anime opposed to the English dub. By the way... if Bardock has been dead for 36 years, Goten would only be 6 and Goku would still be dead on occount of Cell, since Goku was 30 when Cell killed him and he was a new born when Bardock had died. That's the only blooper I found. (sorry, but I had to point it out; it confused me for a moment with Goten being a teenager and all) I still love it! Best Goku-meets-his-daddi-fic I've read so far!
| Angelfish369 chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
That was incredibly sweet. The maturity and selflessness that Bardock has, spending eternity in hell just for a day to meet his day, is just incredible. I LOVE the ending, where Goku says they're Bardock's legacy too. Extremely well done.
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Very well written, very thoughtful, and very genuine. Lightyears ahead of the usual tripe about Bardock returning to meet his son. Very well done!
| 40Anonymous04 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
aww shame bardock had to leave but oh well. That was very well written!
| GovernorDerekthe2nd chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
a pity this wasen't made into a movie